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Reviewed By: am_pris On: August 18, 2004 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. :) I would never have thought of that! :) I didn't really partically like reading the duel parts, but it was great as a whole :)
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Reviewed By: Mel Meiko Mei Ling (not logged in) On: August 17, 2004 15:24 CDT
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What a great duel! Yuna's cards are all over the place, but still, this chapter had a great upbeat pace and flow, with plenty of personality sprinkled throughout. Amazing. -Mel
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 (Not logged in) On: August 16, 2004 23:21 CDT
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Me: Great chapter. Go Yuna! I was really shocked to see how Mokuba acted. But even I have to admit Seto was being a jerk. *Glares at Seto* Speaking of whom. *Grabs his ear and drags him away like Max does to Brock.* Now Seto, you and I are going to have a long, long talk! Brittany: To be honest you actually did have us going there with Yuna surrendering. We were like "WHA!?" Me: I have another feeling! I think maybe what Yuna will have seto do involves a cutsey, hyper, lovable, (and to lonely guys around the world) hot thief girl. ^_^ Though I have to say I wish Toon Dark Magician Girl was in the duel. In my opinion, she is the cutest little duel monster. Well actually it's bit of a three way tie between Toon DMG, Kuriboh, and Watapon. Brittany: Um aibou. Me: Oh sorry. Anyway I can't believe the last chapter is next. And no one besides Tea got to meet LeBlanc. *Still has that little scene in head* Oh well, anyway I can't wait for the last chapter and the sequel.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 23:18 CDT
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YES! YYYYYEEEEEEEESSSS! Kaiba! Got! His! Ass! Kicked! [Everyone cheers and waves banners] I'm going to call the hospital, because of the cliffy you put at the end, which resulted in me having a brain anyersum.
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Reviewed By: Cloud Strife!! On: August 15, 2004 03:17 CDT
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this is the best fan fic ive ever read please update it it is very intriguing please write some more you will be a real hit.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 11:55 CDT
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ARGH! I'm gonna maul you! Another cliffy!? [Weeps] YUNA~!!!! Update...soon...? My heart!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 01:37 CDT
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[Does a happy jig] OOH~ What's gonna happen!? You can't let Yuna lose! ARGH! I want sin to come back and just /SQUASH/ Seto~!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 (Not logged in) On: August 07, 2004 20:23 CDT
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Me: I had to review here instead of FF.Net because the FF.Net review thing is busted for a short time. Anyway, Seto is never going to stop being a moron. I loved the part where Pegasus gave Rikku the Toon monsters. ^_^ That was cute. Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:59 CDT
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:o Oh snap. Kaiba's gonna get his ass whooped.And I see...I read a fic that was a corssover between FF7/YGO, and it was only a duel fic! Ugh!It made me so angry, the whole thing was nothing but a boring old duel! I'm sure you'll be able to keep me hooked! I await, patiently, your next update! [Salute]
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Reviewed By: IMPROVED Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:27 CDT
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[Voictory fanfare plays] WOO! ^_^ [Is actually playing th esong right now] XD You update FAST! How do you do it? Ryou is safe ponce more, if for just a little bit! :O Bakura is hot, but I think Ryou should civilize him ( And by civilize I mean break the habit of him stealing people's souls.) Agh...Stupid MM.org, won't let me get on!!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:26 CDT
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Rarrrgh! Rikku! Aw, if Rikku hadn't been so cocky....Oh well. [Glomps Rikku] Favorite Character, I forgive you!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 14:27 CDT
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Yay! You updated! I'm very happy! But...the cliffhanger....hurts my heart....[Shies away from Logos] ^_^;;; Make him hurt.....he's creepy...
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:51 CDT
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Yes! I'd have to say that you totally rock! the first FFX-2/Yugioh Crossover ever! Everyone is in character! will rikku ever be able to meet Yami Bakura [Har, theif meets theif]? :D I'd have to say that Rikku is my favorite character, as is Yuna. GO YUNA! ^_^ Please update soon...
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Title: I've got a question!
Reviewed By: Lady Amalthea Irrylath [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 10:41 CDT
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Is this the original Final Fantasy game (I hope so), a later version, or the anime?
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Title: new path review
Reviewed By: Caos_2684 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was excellent. you should definitley keep writing. please check out my fan fic, it's also Yu-Gi-Oh.
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