| "Comes with the Territory" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 14:12 CDT
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Moooooooorrrrrrreeeeee!!!!!! I am so delighted by this story! And don't you worry about the plot. There's a plot, I get it, but pure erotica ain't bad too, ya know. I'm definately checking out the first story now.
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: August 24, 2004 01:11 CDT
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so when are you going to update this fic? I love this one and the other one you have going too, People Involved. hope to see something from either fic soon! they both rock!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 09:37 CDT
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lol shippo...great chapter =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 09:23 CDT
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oOoOo great story...inu n kag r so cute!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fan2 On: July 19, 2004 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until you update. You are going to update right??? I so hope so. I read the first one and than i read this one and i think it is written very good. Can't wait until next chaptie.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe a writing genious (sp?) ehr yu detail everything all too well..eh..Whats yur english grade in skewl? lol nice fic update soon...again..nice and big words too lol....
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: Abenobashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this fanfic. You're ability to write in great detail without making it seem too much is very well done. The portrail of all the characters and their habits are done correctly and thoughtfully. I really hope you update again soon. The hentai scenes were also written very well. Don't keep the public waiting! Thanks for the great fic. ~Abeno
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 01:35 CDT
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Glad to see you posting on mm.org now, Lara. I read this tonight on BI and I just saw it here and I still think it's fantastic. 'Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, please! Thanks! --wj
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Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plot or not, I think your story is simply incredible to read. The lemony goodness is just an added bonus. I really applaud your writing style, detailed descriptions, and most of all your ability to accurately portray the characters. Bravo! By the way, did Kouga ever find out about Inu Yasha and Kagome being mated from the prequel to this story? Can't wait to read what you have in store for the Inu Yasha tachi. I'm glad you updated and hope you continue to do so regularily. Keep up the excellent writing, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 20:17 CDT
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Hentai and plot. Woho!!! I really enjoy this. Wonderful. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, the only thing that I can say is: I love you! LOL!
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Reviewed By: ME On: June 10, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited to see you continuing this fic here--I read 'A Dog with a Bone' on one of the lists and LOVED it!! Great story--characterizations/plot--great writing--really gets you into the story--and, of course, very hentai ^_^!! Aaaahhhh....a great story with great lemons....who could ask for anything more?? can't wait for your next update....soon?? ja!
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 16:10 CDT
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Continue soon please ^^
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Reviewed By: Keade Baba On: June 04, 2004 02:44 CDT
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Please continue this it is awesome.
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Reviewed By: Supercool On: June 04, 2004 02:43 CDT
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Wow. I finally come across an excellent written fic. You got me sitting on the edge of my chair wonder how this is all going to play out.
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