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| "Kidoruigenso: Rare Earth Elements" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: Ppppiiiiiiicccckkkk Mmmmeeeee!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kurama's Chick On: June 08, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME:Remiko Teckoma AGE:looks about 14 GENDER: Female ELEMENT:Water HAIR:Light blue with dark blue highlights at the ends EYES:Silver PHYSICAL APPEARENCE: short, slender, very pretty, looks extremely weak but is actually pretty strong, and has long hair always pulled in a low braid CLOTHES/ACCESSORIES: Wears an outfit similar to miko's garbs (think Kikyo from Inuyasha) except that the bottom is an icey blue color; carries a Katana, though prefers her water attacks PERSONALITY:Is very kind to the other Elements, always speaks her mind, and corrects the others and YYH gang when they are wrong, acting like fools, or when they need someone to talk to PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara (because he keeps being a perv and takes advantage of her kindness towarda others)PEOPLE YOU LIKE: Everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: Kurama If you pick my character, e-mail me at brownforde@aol.com Ja ne
| Title: Ppppiiiiiiicccckkkk Mmmmeeeee!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kurama's Chick On: June 08, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME:Remiko Teckoma AGE:looks about 14 GENDER: Female ELEMENT:Water HAIR:Light blue with dark blue highlights at the ends EYES:Silver PHYSICAL APPEARENCE: short, slender, very pretty, looks extremely weak but is actually pretty strong, and has long hair always pulled in a low braid CLOTHES/ACCESSORIES: Wears an outfit similar to miko's garbs (think Kikyo from Inuyasha) except that the bottom is an icey blue color; carries a Katana, though prefers her water attacks PERSONALITY:Is very kind to the other Elements, always speaks her mind, and corrects the others and YYH gang when they are wrong, acting like fools, or when they need someone to talk to PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara (because he keeps being a perv and takes advantage of her kindness towarda others)PEOPLE YOU LIKE: Everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: Kurama
| Reviewed By: sundancer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 14:31 CDT
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NAME: Rauko AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 15 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: fire HAIR COLOR:blonde with orange and red tips EYE COLOR: blood red PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: short,spiked up hair,slender CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES:silver chain with pheonix pendent, black pants with flames at the bottom sleevless black gloves, black shirt that sleeves reach elbows with a pheonix on it and red bandanna PERSONALITY:tomboy,cheerful,caring, she will fight till the very end and give her life for the others,she does not care what happens to her as long as everyone else is alright she puts other before herself. PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara PEOPLE YOU LIKE: everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: toya
| Title: OOO PICK ME PLZ!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hieilver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME: Ravyne Takeda AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 15 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: fire HAIR COLOR: Midnight Black EYE COLOR: Scarlet(blood) red PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: Short(5ft), slender, some muscle, keeps knee length hair down(at all times). CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: Black leather pants(not to tight),Black tank top, Black trench coat (that goes down to the ankles), Black Kswiss shoes, Black Dragon necklace. PERSONALITY: she tends to be quiet, serious, and gets pissed off extreamly easy. She's a tomboy, and curses a good deal, has a "I dont give a F*ck" attitude even though she'd risk her own life for any of her fellow guardians, demons, and humans. She is only a softy when it comes to Hiei, but she doesn't show anyone, not even him(not yet anyway). PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara, Botan, Koenma, Yusake. PEOPLE YOU LIKE: everyone else. ROMANTIC INTEREST: Hiei Jaganshi. Sounds like a great story, i wanna be in it!!!plz???
| Title: Wanna be a guardian, plz
Reviewed By: mizuno_ami2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:24 CDT
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NAME: Lynnette Ward AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 16 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: earth HAIR COLOR: dark brown (almost black) EYE COLOR: brown PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: short, slender, not much muscle, hair is shoulder length, not the type of girl that would be in a playboy magazine (in other words, not very "built") CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: a brown kimono that is thigh length (has black shorts under it) with slits down the sides. she wields a very powerful staff that she uses with her powers and to fight with. PERSONALITY: she pretty quiet but if you piss her off, BEWARE. she can be fiery. she's also a big romantic. she doesn't like to be pushed around whatsoever. PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara PEOPLE YOU LIKE: everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: Kurama I don't know if you need this, but here is my email address to tell me if you are picking my character: LawyerFrodo@aol.com
| Reviewed By: starfirejen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:30 CDT
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can i be in it?plz! name:jen age:15 gender:female element:wind hair:black wavy loose( in pigtails when fighting) reaches past shoulders eye:dark blue physical appearence:(looks like Talim from soul calibur 2)slender,lean,pretty & about 5'4 clothes/accessories:light green tank top,white capris,white tenis shoes,gold necklace with a moon & star& arm blades. personality:tomboy,hyper with candy,loves to sing,can be moody& a loner,a good friend,and always there for her friends. people i dislike:kuwabara,& botan people i like:everyone else. romantic interest:hiei,jin or yusuke
| Title: Character
Reviewed By: rouge_divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:03 CDT
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Name:Chase Age:16 Gender:Female Element:Air Hair:Midnight Blue Eyes: silver Apperence:petite, slender, tone with boyish haircut. Clothing: White long sleeved, shirt that hangs off shoulders. Blue ribbon wrapped from wrist to elbow on both arms, blue corset, blue jeans and white tennis shoes. Naginatajitsu is always carried for combat. Personality: Kind and gentle and sometimes a bit of an airhead at times. But like the wind, I can also be harsh and wild. Dislike:Kuwabara, and Koenma Like:everyone else Romantic intrerest: Hiei or Kurama I can't decide there both cute
| Title: Can i be in your story??????
Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:01 CDT
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NAME Green AGE YOU LOOK LIKE 14 GENDER Female ELEMENT YOU RUIE OVER Earth HAIR COLOR Dark green EYE COLOR Bright orange PHYSICAL APPEARANCE not really too muscular , slender, and about 5'4 CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES wears a navy blue tank top with baggy green pants.On her arm is a red ribbon. PERSONALITY pretty nice, can be shy.you she her temper , not very often,........but when you do,............and she cares for her friends PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE Kuwabara and Koenma PEOPLE U LIKE everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST Kurama??,.........or u can chose,.....................
| Title: character
Reviewed By: Hiei-Is-My-Squishie!!!!! On: June 03, 2004 15:34 CDT
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NAME: Mirabella Hakimisho, nicknamed Mira AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 17 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: Life HAIR COLOR: Black with green and silver streaks EYE COLOR: changes with mood PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: short, about 4'9, thin, pointed ears, high, pronounced cheekbones, small nose, medium sized eyes. CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: black tanktop w/a silver dragon on the front, black flared jeans, knee high boots worn over the jeans when fighting or training, red dragon necklace. PERSONALITY: quiet and thoughtful, as if caught in a dream. she has a mind that clicks into action when in a situation with seemingly no way out. devious and cunning, she always refuses to step down in a fight. she will keep fighting until she either passes out or wins. gets pissed off extremely easily. most people dare not cross her. has an obsession with fire and likes to have a laugh by transforming into an exact duplicate of another person and saying embarassing things that are never true. PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara and Koenma PEOPLE YOU LIKE: Hiei, Yusuke, Kurama, Genkai, Koenma's Ogres, Botan, Yukina, Keiko. ROMANTIC INTEREST: Hiei
| Title: Hope you like her
Reviewed By: RabidChicken On: June 03, 2004 12:58 CDT
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NAME: Tomi Ukashiro AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 15-16 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: Wind (I didn't know someone else chose earth) HAIR COLOR: brown with burnt amber tips EYE COLOR: Honey brown PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: Average height. I'm 5'5" three inches shorter than Yusuke. Slender, lean, and her hair falls around her shoulders. CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: A black body suit. Much like Angelina Joulie's in Tomb Raider, but I have a black jacket to go with it. I always carry my Katana PERSONALITY: Tomboyish, stoic. A little like Sesshomaru. PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara, Koenma, Botan, Keiko. PEOPLE YOU LIKE: everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: Yusuke That was weird. I didn't see it go through.
| Title: My character
Reviewed By: RabidChicken On: June 03, 2004 12:52 CDT
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Hello, I was interested in your fic and decided to send you my character. Hope you like her. NAME: Tomi Ukashiro AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 15-16 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: Earth HAIR COLOR: brown with burnt amber tips. EYE COLOR: Honey brown PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: Average height at 5'5" I'm three inches shorter than Yusuke. Slender,lean and her hair is at her shoulders. CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: Black bodysuit with a jacket. If you've watched Tomb Raider, it's like Angelina Joulie's outfit. But I have a black jacket to go with it. I always carry my Katana with me. PERSONALITY: Tomboyish, stoic attitude. Doesn't like to show her soft side often if she can help it. (A little like Sesshomaru actually)And distinctly loves a challenge. PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Kuwabara, Koenma,Botan, Keiko PEOPLE YOU LIKE: everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: Yusuke
| Title: My Character
Reviewed By: Wolfstar On: June 03, 2004 08:46 CDT
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NAME: Gekkei AGE YOU LOOK LIKE: 15 GENDER: female ELEMENT TO RULE OVER: Earth HAIR COLOR: Black with green tips EYE COLOR: Green PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: Short and muscular (for a girl), always seems to be smiling. Hair is very long, but keeps it tied up in a braid. CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: She wears a noble's expensive kimono, but before going into a planned battle she wears traditional armor, complete with spiked breatplates (like Sesshomaru's). PERSONALITY: She is like a peace-maker, always trying to find the right things to do and things to say to keep everyone happy, despite how horrible she may be feeling. However, she is a little hesitant to risk her life for anyone else. PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Yusuke, Hiei, Koenma, Botan PEOPLE YOU LIKE: everyone else ROMANTIC INTEREST: Kurama
| Title: oh, i like this one...
Reviewed By: Bubbly_Yet_Scary On: June 03, 2004 08:40 CDT
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hey, you know rfpfirecat? well, I'm gonna' make her a sister!! well, since WE are sisters... but anyways: NAME: Amira, but ALWAYS wants to be called Ami. AGE: looks about 12 or 13 GENDER: Female ELEMENT: water HAIR COLOR: Black with blue and white streaks EYE COLOR: Dark Midnight Blue with a white circle around it PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: young and beautiful, with a little bit of muscle, and very slender, about % foot 6 CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: White tang top with an ice blue jacket with a hood, and white pants with blue streaks. carries a bow and arrows at all times. PERSONALITY: Is vey stubborn and rude, and almost NEVER follows orders from others, except from Mother Earth herself and Serena (if she's added), and she is quite considerate of herself, and only herself, but she can be most kind, sometimes.PEOPLE YOU DISLIKE: Yusuke, Kuwabara, Botan, Hiei, Koenma, Keiko, shizuru... and pretty much everyone else except for the following below. PEOPLE YOU LIKE: Mother Earth, Serena, Kurama, George the Ogre (he makes her laugh, and anyone who DOES NOT bother her ROMANTIC INTEREST: Kurama
| Title: oops AGAIN
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: June 03, 2004 08:27 CDT
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sorry, well as I was saying until my brother snuck up on me and clicked "submit" twice (i think he'll stop since I whacked him unconscious).... Element: Life Hair Color: Black with red and green streaks Eye Color: Deep Aqua with a light green haze Physical Appearance: Muscular but not bulky, about 6 foot 3 inches tall and a white crescent moon on forehead and two cream-colored horizontal stripes along cheeks and wrists (think Sesshomaru) CLothing/Accessories: Hair- think Kikyo and Inuyasha's clothing except it is white. Has three different length swords Personality: Mysterious and quite like Hiei's attitude, only alot worse. Tempers arise quite easily and quite suddenly, has a voice that will shake you to the bone, and has a rage which can strike fear in even the most brave animals. But she can be kind and VERY considerate at some points, it just depends what you make her feel, you know, getting on her bad side. People you dislike: boys who try to win her heart (god, wil they EVER GO AWAY???!!!!), Koenma, Kurama, Kuwabara, and almost anyone who has a knack at getting on her nerves (like her family, or once was family...) People you like: anyone who wasn't stated in the above category Romantic interest: Hiei
| Title: me character
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: June 03, 2004 08:14 CDT
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um, I hope you didn't create that character and are going to attatch it to your story, cause' if you're going to use my charactr, there will be some evil, vicious battles between the characters. Name: Serena Age I look: 16 Gender: obviously female
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