| "Mind Reader" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 (nli) On: July 28, 2004 08:21 CDT
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Oh, and Sessgirl? SESSHY IS SO TOTALLY MINE!!!! **goes and makes out w/ fluffy**
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 (nli) On: July 28, 2004 08:19 CDT
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Yay! ^^ I like random thoughts! They're fun!!! ^^ ~WATERMELON!~ Uhhh... I'm hungry right now, so I gotta go. Cya! ~SALMON!~ ~SUGAR!~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 28, 2004 06:53 CDT
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Well I enjoyed it, you had some excellent moments in there even if the plot didn't advamce much. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ehehe On: July 27, 2004 23:52 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA That was hilarous! I almost fell on the ground but my desk saved me. heheh. I hope you update soon! Ure story brightens my day. I hope Inuyasha keeps argueing with his mind and his mind wins and he immits that does truely love her and not that bag of clay. And poor Kirara. I juss wanna give her a hug but then again she prolly wouldnt like that very much...And Sango is being very violent...good. lol i love it! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Person- On: July 27, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee hee "I LOVE CHOCOLATE!!"
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 21, 2004 17:41 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Loved the way you manipulated events to force Kagome to go with Sesshomaru like that. The only thing was how could you do that to Inuyasha and Miroku? Torture, yes. Demons, yes. But Shippo? That's too cruel. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 13:58 CDT
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Lol,I hate the toad too! Too bad you didn't have Fluffy tear him in half,that would have been funny.
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 09:44 CDT
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Jaken sucks. Damn toad...he needs to be be squashed. Oh, and Sess is so hot!! *thinking-->* He's MINE and no body else can have him!! I'll fight whoever wants to take him away! HAHAHAHA!!!!*end thinking* OK, anyway, Great chapter and update soon. :-)
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Title: he he he
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 (I never log in...) On: July 20, 2004 21:04 CDT
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I hate Jaken! He's just WAY too ugly to be with my sweet, sweet, Sesshoumaru *gets big eyes and looks off dreamily* Anyway, this is soooooo funny. but what's so bad about Shippo? @_@ I'm confused... Anyway, you should have more mind reading. And have her find the ability to be able to look through a person's mind, like look at his memories, or maybe subtly influence it... ^_~ Anyway, cya!
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 20:19 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Jaken was threatened!!! Stupid toad! KEEP UPDATING!
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Reviewed By: kawaii miko (not signed in) On: July 15, 2004 02:02 CDT
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Hah! Naraku is conspiring with the jittry squirrel. But... will he only have one eye now since Kagome shot him? Hm... I'll have to wait and see! Awwe, poor Shippo. Kirara loathes him. I think the only two who truly don't though are Kagome and Sango. Oh I just thought of something. Wouldn't Miroku corrupt our innocent Kagome with his hentai thoughts? I mean, she's so pure, and he's so... not! Haha! Well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl (not signed in) On: July 14, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 14, 2004 18:21 CDT
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Oh poot...Naraku has Akki. Of all the things that could have happened that was possibly the last one they needed. Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: cute_sweetheart11 On: July 14, 2004 17:19 CDT
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I really like your story. The only thing I think you should do is make it so one night Inuyasha thinks that hes in love with Kagome and Kagome questions him about it forcing her to reveal that she can read peoples minds. Another thing I think you should do is make it so she can understand the youkai that they fight so that she can warn her friends of what the youkai is going to do next.
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 16:05 CDT
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About time that you wrote,damnit!
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