| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: Chapt. 17
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Greensville [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thx for the story it was great but it fels like you could continue with it and i wish you do but it it is up to you and thx again for the story ^_^
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Reviewed By: canongal102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
AARRGGGHH!!!!*pulls out hair* y do u get us addicted and then forget about it!?! this is SUCH a good fanfic! it does not deserve this abuse!!!! *pout*
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Reviewed By: anime is inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far.
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Reviewed By: piper_prue_paigep3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
i blove it but you NEED to finish it PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Title: wowee!!!
Reviewed By: raven watson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 01:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha sorry, i don't think i've ever actually said 'wowee' so i thought i'd use it now. haha. Ok, on with the review. I love sappy love stories! and this one is awesome! hehehe. I liked your lemonlime, it was a tasteful expression of intimate love. I do admit that i thought it was cheesy, but i was grinning like a madwoman the whole time. aah, the affects of love upon the soul... anyway. I really like this story and hope that you update soon so i can love it some more! in a completely platonic way of course. In a technical review i must say there are quite a few instances of mistakes like he instead of her or she, simple things that aren't that big of a deal, but it's a review right? either way.... i can't wait for the next 5-7 chapters! woot woot!
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Title: Sakura Samora
Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
You say this version and the title says old version, so wheres the new one?
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Title: i love this one and.....
Reviewed By: Cassandra_Huskey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Story specully when Inuyasha got shot at the fireline that part made me cry. I need to ask a question I'm on of a inuyasha Fan fiction too here and how do u do that bottom part there in your stories Sailor X huh?
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Title: Kagome&the Pirate Captain
Reviewed By: kittymeow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was.....interesting, but good, really good.
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Reviewed By: Mooney01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 09:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey Sailor X damn u, damn u, DAMN U! but oh well i knew it would happen, just not with kagome present. -Starx_X
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Dreaming Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! DAT STORY WAS SO GOOD! WHEN YOU FINISH PLEASE LET ME KNOW I LUV YOUR OTHER STORY LETTERS ALSO BUT U COULDV'E HAD A BETTA ENDING BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD I LEAVE U 10 KUDOS
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Dreaming Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! DAT STORY WAS SO GOOD! WHEN YOU FINISH PLEASE LET ME KNOW I LUV YOUR OTHER STORY LETTERS ALSO BUT U COULDV'E HAD A BETTA ENDING BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD I LEAVE U 10 KUDOS
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Reviewed By: piper_prue_paigep3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to put up the sequal I have been waiting for years!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I haven't read a story this good in a long time! I wish you would have finished but *sigh* oh well. I love InuYasha X Kagome romances! I just can't get enough of them!
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 03:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
i aboslutely love it so far. i've read all 22 chapters and hope you re-post the newer version asap. i can't wait to see what happens next. in the mean time, ill go check out those other ones u wrote.
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