| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: Greatness^_^
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Even though Inuyasha did do evil things I do love how you made him kind and yet I don't think you did wrong in making him do such evil things. It is a good turn for the story making the characters all have to respond to this situation. I love how you made Kagome a Christian and they prayed before eating and she wanted to save herself for marriage. I loved that! And you had that in your fic yet at the same time you had Inuyasha as a cool developed character. I am loving this fic enough that it deserves a review with all these nine hundred and something characters left but I don't think I will finish them all but I'll try for it. I liked how she was his slave at the beginning of the fic. The way he treated her was wrong but I think that made it even better because now he has in a way a past of being evil and now a present and being nice and a possible future of doing evil things again. I feel for Inuyasha highly and I hope that things get better. And when Kagome and Inuyasha get together I can't wait for it and for the next chapter. I think it gives him the ability to repent for what he did and maybe not so much give up his pirate life but try and settle for a more well hehe maybe a less filled with killing people one. But you did Kouga well as well. I liked how he was possesive of Kagome and the close calls that happened. I feel for the other girls. But great and absolutely wonderful fic. I've used all the charries. Bye bye! See Ya! ^_~
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Title: Dying from the wait!!!
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When oh when will we get more??!!!!
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Title: Absolutely Perfect
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally Awesome!! I love your stuff
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Title: LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Water Fairy On: October 02, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!I cryed so much my friend had to read it to me cause I could't see then she started to cry! Please finish the story or I'll team up with animefreak2234 and send evil penguins to your house!I love how you put morals in the story.It is best story I've ever read Oh by the way you totally pulled off PG-13 in chapter 20.Please finish the story.
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Reviewed By: Water Fairy On: October 02, 2005 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!I cried so much my friend had to read to me cause I couldn't see then she started to cry! Please finish the story or I'll team up with animefreak2234 and send evil penguins to your house!I love your morals and how you put them in the story. It is the best story I've ever read!Oh and by the way you totally pulled off PG-13 in chapter 20.Please finish the story.
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Reviewed By: Opal_Eyes On: September 22, 2005 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story! You are a creative genius! I also support your views on sex whole-heartedly. Oh, and thank you for making Koga look so badly! (cackles fiendishly) Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, what about the other version? I really want to read more! But I would need to other version to do that! Please help!!...Please?!
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Title: I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover141414 On: September 04, 2005 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!! IT S ALMOST BETTER THAN THE REALL STORY!!! I STARTED @ READ THIS THINKING IT WOULD BE STUPID>>>> BUT BOY WAS I WRONG!!! LUCKILY>>> I GOT A SuGAR RUSH SO I COULD READ IT ALL !!!! I LOVE IT!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE ANOTHER LIKE THIS!!!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Inugirlfan1 (nli) On: August 09, 2005 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMLS! That was great! It was just...well...written wrong. GREAT IDEA though. I would have never thought of that....but as I said before you wrote it wrong. Great idea and great descriptions....but yeah. Anyway I absolutely LOVED it and Inuyasha is a great...very hott pirate. Oh! And love the name! CAPTAIN SILVER HANYOU!
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Title: hanyou kagome
Reviewed By: inuome On: August 06, 2005 06:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow I loved it. I spent 8 hours reading the whole thing it was great! I actually cried once it really cought alot of emotion. If you continue please email me at x_hanyoukagome_x@yahoo.com. I have some of my own stories at adult fan fiction.net my writer name is inuome.
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Reviewed By: Snow Ahriman On: August 05, 2005 00:01 CDT
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I normally don't read this pairing I think Inu is a jerk. But I saw one of the related fanarts and said why not. Lets just say I love the story.
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Reviewed By: tomiki On: July 30, 2005 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was good and you got that rigjt about inyyasha binging an ass so he better stop acting like that soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kags_1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying reading this story, you have a real talent, please do finish this story, don't let other people discourage you.
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Title: more!!
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more i cant beleive you what kind of author dosnet finish he story there are so many questions that are still unanswered i just finished chapter 22 and i think you were saying something about not writting anymore....you cant do that what about all the rest of your devoted fans(including me) please finish it o i will be force to find your house and send evil penguins after you(they may look sweet but they plan on being the supream over-lords of the wold starting with you) if you dont finish the story so please finish it i beg of you (i dont beg vey offten) more more more more more more more more!!thank you yours truly animefeak2234 if you want respond back at animefreak2234@yahoo.com thakies!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever (nli) On: June 22, 2005 14:10 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!!! SQUEE! Your not going to end it there are you? Ha, I love it so much I am actually reviewing which I haven't done in forever!!! Its just damn awesome!
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