| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyashafan234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good dahling,but you should finish it.
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Title: lil hottie0206
Reviewed By: Lil Hottie0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
tell me if theres another version when you review my story the silver hanyou! THX!!!!!!!!!
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Title: lil hottie0206
Reviewed By: Lil Hottie0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
oh and what do you mean when you said old version is there an other version?
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Title: lil hottie0206
Reviewed By: Lil Hottie0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i read this story a while ago and it was wonderful!!!! i loved how you made hate each other at first and then they couldnt stand being away from each other you are so romantic with your storys. plz read my new story The Silver Hanyou. i no it sounds like yours but i think its diffrent. man i think i feel like reading this story again! luv, Lil Hottie0206
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Title: Chapt. 17
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Chapt. 17
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Greensville [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thx for the story it was great but it fels like you could continue with it and i wish you do but it it is up to you and thx again for the story ^_^
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Reviewed By: canongal102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
AARRGGGHH!!!!*pulls out hair* y do u get us addicted and then forget about it!?! this is SUCH a good fanfic! it does not deserve this abuse!!!! *pout*
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Reviewed By: anime is inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far.
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Reviewed By: piper_prue_paigep3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
i blove it but you NEED to finish it PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Title: wowee!!!
Reviewed By: raven watson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 01:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha sorry, i don't think i've ever actually said 'wowee' so i thought i'd use it now. haha. Ok, on with the review. I love sappy love stories! and this one is awesome! hehehe. I liked your lemonlime, it was a tasteful expression of intimate love. I do admit that i thought it was cheesy, but i was grinning like a madwoman the whole time. aah, the affects of love upon the soul... anyway. I really like this story and hope that you update soon so i can love it some more! in a completely platonic way of course. In a technical review i must say there are quite a few instances of mistakes like he instead of her or she, simple things that aren't that big of a deal, but it's a review right? either way.... i can't wait for the next 5-7 chapters! woot woot!
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Title: Sakura Samora
Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
You say this version and the title says old version, so wheres the new one?
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Title: i love this one and.....
Reviewed By: Cassandra_Huskey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Story specully when Inuyasha got shot at the fireline that part made me cry. I need to ask a question I'm on of a inuyasha Fan fiction too here and how do u do that bottom part there in your stories Sailor X huh?
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Title: Kagome&the Pirate Captain
Reviewed By: kittymeow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was.....interesting, but good, really good.
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Reviewed By: Mooney01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 09:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey Sailor X damn u, damn u, DAMN U! but oh well i knew it would happen, just not with kagome present. -Starx_X
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