| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: Well?
Reviewed By: WingedGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Are you putting anymore up? It's been a while hasnt it?
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Reviewed By: Manderz On: February 27, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I share many of your beliefs. Such as waiting for marrige. I plan on doing so, my cousin and I made a promise we would wait til' after marrige. Even though I'm only 13. I am a Christian and it's nice to see others writing Fan fics like this. Thank you for standing up for what you belive in! God Bless! Amanda
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Title: a person?
Reviewed By: Princess_Laura On: February 23, 2005 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVES IT!!!!! lol, I hope you update soon, because I am REALLY into this story, thought the spelling/grammar and watnot was a little hard to understand sometimes, it all made sense in the end GO YOU! lol amazing job and I loved the pictures that went with this fic, you are a really good artist (you could totally kill me in a drawing contest! lol) well, that's all I have to say besides I CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! but I already said that at the beginning so just ignore that lol ttyl, TTFN!!!
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: CrystalEyedYasha(Not logged on) On: February 20, 2005 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I love your story and your art!!! I really wanted to see those videos that you talk about so much but when i went to the link yesterday, you put up that you had to move it. I really want to see how they are but anywayz, I LOVED YOUR PIRATE STORY, ITS SO CUTE!!!! -Annie-
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Title: OMG I SOOOOOOO LUV IT
Reviewed By: Haley On: February 19, 2005 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH I LUV IT I LUV IT!!!!!!!! CAN"T HELP IT!!!!!! sorry it is soooooooooooooooo awsome
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Title: Luv it!
Reviewed By: ~Kagome~ On: February 07, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. I absolutely LOVE your fan fic! Sometimes your writeing confuses me a bit... but it's ok sence I LOVE your story! ^-^ I enjoy reading this book, it's definetly something new!! I LOVE the way you kept the Japanese characters, yet mixed them with the pirate setting! ^-^ Awsome!! I give you 1,000,000,000,000 out of 1,000,000,000,000!!!!!!! Which means.... you ROCK!!!!! Keep up the good work!! I mean it!! ^-^ Once again... I LOVE your fan fic, I'm your biggest fan!! signed, ~Kagome~ AKA your biggest fan in the history of fandom!!!!! >_> See ya laters!!! Write more SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm begging you to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets on hands and knees and begs.* ^-^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! Well anyways.. good bye for now!! ^-^
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Title: Silver Dog Demon
Reviewed By: Silver D. On: January 28, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great writing style. You had a few grammatical errors. For creativity I gave you a 9 because it's Inuyasha so you can only go so far with originality. Otherwise creativity is great. It's completely different from the Inuyasha series. I like the different time periond and the story line definitely creative. Although it sounds a little like Pirates of the Caribbean. You keep me entertained and I look forward to more. I wonder what Inuyasha wants to do with the jewel? Well, please update soon so we can find out k? Thanks!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great story! What happened to the chapter where InuYasha goes Youkai and tries to rape Kagome. It isn't on here, and I am so confused. Other than that, this story kicks a**!
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Reviewed By: Akihanah(too lazy to sign in) On: January 14, 2005 11:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story. I usually don't like when the characters are transplanted somewhere, but this one was really good. I think the scene where he finally gets soft..in the hot spring..is probablythe most funny in the story. I laughed so hard, once I got over the kawaii ness of it. I hope your health improves.
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Reviewed By: dog_eared_freak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:10 CST
Comment/Review:
great job, hope you update soon ja!
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Reviewed By: kagomeluvsinu On: December 12, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED your stori!!!!!!!!!!! :D it was awsome!kawii!!
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Title: Kagome and the Pirate Captain,The Silver Hanyou(old version)
Reviewed By: Jane/Sabrina On: December 10, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it I'll look it up on fanfiction.net anyway keep up the good work.BYE!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: akiido_lover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awesome fanfic! Hey why did you delete the newer version. I gave you a 10 in spelling and grammer because I'm not much at them either sometimes I can't even spell the simplist words. I think that it was really different than the pirates of the Carrabean. So keep writing it you're very talented and not many people can make tow people hate each other and then fall hoplessly in love without confusing the hell out of people. so come on keep writing I must know the end so come on think about it please. Just keep on posting if you do that then i will keep on reviewing your story.
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Title: Report
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotten some "Has to many similarities to Pirates of the Caribean".... I STARTED TO WRITE THIS FIC BEFORE THAT CAME OUT AND I DIDN"T SEE THE BLASTED MOVIE TILL AFTER I FINISHED 22!!!! So everything came from my mind, not copying anything!!!!!! But I'm still working on the revision and drawing more art. till next time taataa. yahoo: inuyashaz_kagome....email sailorx@hanson.net
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Reviewed By: AngelofLight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good fic, i love it!
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