| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: Luv it!
Reviewed By: ~Kagome~ On: February 07, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. I absolutely LOVE your fan fic! Sometimes your writeing confuses me a bit... but it's ok sence I LOVE your story! ^-^ I enjoy reading this book, it's definetly something new!! I LOVE the way you kept the Japanese characters, yet mixed them with the pirate setting! ^-^ Awsome!! I give you 1,000,000,000,000 out of 1,000,000,000,000!!!!!!! Which means.... you ROCK!!!!! Keep up the good work!! I mean it!! ^-^ Once again... I LOVE your fan fic, I'm your biggest fan!! signed, ~Kagome~ AKA your biggest fan in the history of fandom!!!!! >_> See ya laters!!! Write more SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm begging you to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets on hands and knees and begs.* ^-^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! Well anyways.. good bye for now!! ^-^
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Title: Silver Dog Demon
Reviewed By: Silver D. On: January 28, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great writing style. You had a few grammatical errors. For creativity I gave you a 9 because it's Inuyasha so you can only go so far with originality. Otherwise creativity is great. It's completely different from the Inuyasha series. I like the different time periond and the story line definitely creative. Although it sounds a little like Pirates of the Caribbean. You keep me entertained and I look forward to more. I wonder what Inuyasha wants to do with the jewel? Well, please update soon so we can find out k? Thanks!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great story! What happened to the chapter where InuYasha goes Youkai and tries to rape Kagome. It isn't on here, and I am so confused. Other than that, this story kicks a**!
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Reviewed By: Akihanah(too lazy to sign in) On: January 14, 2005 11:46 CST
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I love this story. I usually don't like when the characters are transplanted somewhere, but this one was really good. I think the scene where he finally gets soft..in the hot spring..is probablythe most funny in the story. I laughed so hard, once I got over the kawaii ness of it. I hope your health improves.
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Reviewed By: dog_eared_freak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:10 CST
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great job, hope you update soon ja!
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Reviewed By: kagomeluvsinu On: December 12, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED your stori!!!!!!!!!!! :D it was awsome!kawii!!
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Title: Kagome and the Pirate Captain,The Silver Hanyou(old version)
Reviewed By: Jane/Sabrina On: December 10, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it I'll look it up on fanfiction.net anyway keep up the good work.BYE!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: akiido_lover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awesome fanfic! Hey why did you delete the newer version. I gave you a 10 in spelling and grammer because I'm not much at them either sometimes I can't even spell the simplist words. I think that it was really different than the pirates of the Carrabean. So keep writing it you're very talented and not many people can make tow people hate each other and then fall hoplessly in love without confusing the hell out of people. so come on keep writing I must know the end so come on think about it please. Just keep on posting if you do that then i will keep on reviewing your story.
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Title: Report
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotten some "Has to many similarities to Pirates of the Caribean".... I STARTED TO WRITE THIS FIC BEFORE THAT CAME OUT AND I DIDN"T SEE THE BLASTED MOVIE TILL AFTER I FINISHED 22!!!! So everything came from my mind, not copying anything!!!!!! But I'm still working on the revision and drawing more art. till next time taataa. yahoo: inuyashaz_kagome....email sailorx@hanson.net
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Reviewed By: AngelofLight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good fic, i love it!
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Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:54 CDT
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Good, except 15 IS just about right. Back then their life expectancy is very short. 35 years to 45 years. See? So they had to "start early" and stuff. Age 13 you're just a wee bit too young to have a child, but it happened even that young. Other than that, it's great. I'm still waiting for the revised version on fanfiction.net. ^_^
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Reviewed By: C On: August 23, 2004 14:50 CDT
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yeah!!!!!!!!! luv ur story! ^^ i just adore pirates, eww i nvr knew that houga could b so sick and demandin, that was xpected of naraku tho... i like ur usage of other languages. ^^ tata
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enojoy readinmg this tory i hope you still continue it
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:14 CDT
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COOL FIC! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: 1Inufan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 21:48 CDT
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FINALLY DONE! Took me freaking 4 hrs to read it. worth it though. This was excellent! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! O in one of your chapters you put Sesshomaru told something to Sesshomaru. ^_^ sorryz to spoil anything. i can't wait for more!
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