| "Paper Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: paper moon
Reviewed By: kay kay On: June 04, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this story is going to turn out to be a wonderful one. keep it up. i hope to see more chapters very soon because i'm already hooked. great job!
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Reviewed By: psycolday101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon.
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Reviewed By: psycolday101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 11:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rating is a 10+ This is the best story i've read lately. I love the plot and the direction is very original. I also like that you didn't use a really cheesy (unoriginal) last name. Hope you update soon. Love it. Keep it up.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Luna Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice start, and I must admit, I find it interesting. I like the idea of them marrying for somthing other than love...I have a similar situation in one of my fan fics. I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you posting your stories here, Lara. And I hope you update this one soon! I just love your lemons! ;) --wj
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