| "The Price of Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 18:17 PST
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That was good. It's nice to know just what they have been doing these last five months. Oh, and thank you. Now I wonder what Koharu's reaction to Sango's return will be? And I too want to know if Sango knows who's the father of the pups. Oh and I just want to say that I love the 'Unworthy one' myself. It's a great story. Keep this great work going, later.
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Title: Yeah!!
Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 16:15 PST
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Yeah, great chapter!!! I was just wondering, does Sango know that Kag is pregnant with Sesshy's children? Anyways great chappie, I can't waitto find out whats next!! Keep up the incredible work, and please, please, please, update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Delu On: November 05, 2004 14:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ohhhh, your fan fic is so deliciously yummy! You've done such a wonderful job in writing the characters, in integrating the series here and there in your story. It is brilliant, and I can't wait to read more ^_^
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Title: Wonderful Work
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I am glad he admits it. Even if it took him draining Kagome's power to see it. Emotions still clouds minds in even the emotionless. So now to find out what she feels. Oh, and give us a update on Inuyasha and Sango. Can't wait for more. Hope inspiration keeps going for you. Later.
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: October 26, 2004 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! And I am so glad that all the death threats everyone sent you did the trick-LOL!! And I loved the very end... about the sword ins.-Cracked me up. But for real I can't wait for more updates this is an awsome fic!!!
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 21:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is such a great story. But there is one thing I am confused about, how far along is Kagome? I keep seeing 5 months then I see 2 months and now I'm just hopelessly lost. So if you could please straighten that out for me that would be great. If you have already answered this then I'm sorry for asking again.
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Reviewed By: solqua unlogged On: October 25, 2004 21:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was such a great chapter. so very much wortht the wait to see sesshoumaru finally getting his head straight concerning kagome. absolutely love it.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is WOW. This is great. I love your story. The relationships between the charactors flow well with the plot and I am glad that you continue to share what each one is doing. Your pairs are interesting, and I have loved each mating scene you have produced. I can see that perhaps soon they will all be gathering together and Naraku had best find the deepest hole to hide in. Not that it would do him any bit of good. His got way too many people that want vengence. Great title by the way. It all come clear why that was chosen. I am rambling. I hope you update soon. The suspence will be killing me until you do. Thanks for the great story. And keep up the great work.
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Title: My new Favorite
Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just spent the last couple days reading this wonderful fic and I completely love it. It has so much depth and you really bring out all the life of the characters. This fic is so well written that it is very easy to "see" the story in your mind. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece of art. I hope that you'll continue and very soon.
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Reviewed By: Kates On: September 27, 2004 15:57 PDT
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Awesome chapters!!!!! I can not wait for the next one. When will there finally be some Sess and Kag action! THey need to be together, poor Kag is all left out of the lovey dovey circle. And she needs to melt Sesshy's cold heart!!! Keep up the incredible work and please please please update as soon as possible!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay dude, you have this fic uploaded in three seperate places that I know of now, so you had better freaking update! This is the best damn fic I've read in ages, so if you don't update, your going to have one very unhappy camper on your hands! I'll e-mail you all the time and become the most annoying critter you've ever met. I've already got your e-mail address, just in case it comes to an update war, my friend. On a less creey note, UPDATE SOON, ahem... Um, update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: September 26, 2004 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a cliffhanger! I hope the group reunites soon...dose Inuyasha know that Kagome is pregnant? By now Kagome is 5 months into her pregnancy right...
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Reviewed By: Kates On: September 22, 2004 18:52 PDT
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I'm sooo happy you got out soo many chapters it was like heaven!!! I hope Inu and Kag meet up soon I'm getting anxious to see whats gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the incredible work and update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 09:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will this change Sesshomaru's attitude/feelings toward Inuyasha? And what if Kagome's pregnant? Will Sesshomaru know, why doesn't she just go to her time to find out...it seems to me that she's taking things a lot better than a normal person would. I look forward to the next chap! Please update soon.
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Title: AWESOME!!
Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 14:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey! that was awesome btw. i was reading the last chapter and didn't realize it ended rite there! EVIL CLIFFY! anyways i luv this fic and hope u update soon. i feel so~ sorri for kag. cuz all this time she thought of inuyasha :( but i supposed i should feel sorri sesshy too, however i wat i don't get is y he was so mad, cuz he was just using kag anyways rite? alrite u can clear up my confused mind it would be appreciated, thanx for the enjoyment, toodles~
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