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| "Treasure Buried Deep Within" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 17:30 CST
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Oooo. The tension mounts. Very well done. So what if some of the characters are a bit OC? *coughbotoncough* Isn't that what fanfiction is about? I can't wait for Kagome and Shippo to meet up. I won't get to see that if you don't UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: user: Kage Hogosha On: December 10, 2004 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm, very interesting. some of this this stuff i've learned about in school. please update soon. i like this fic alot.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 19:06 CST
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O.O I feel pity for Kurama, Yuuske, and Kagome. heh, Hiei is mad... but there is more to this than meets the eye... Is Koenma bitter perhaps at losing at poker? Or is there a far more sinister plot in the making...
| Reviewed By: Kagomesunni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 22:59 CST
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SO there's no chance of this fanfic becoming a Hiei/Kagome/Kurama? *sniff sniff* Well atleast it's not a Botan/Kurama...No offense if you are a fan...Pwease udpdate soon! ^.^
| Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 18:04 CST
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......poor Hiei....
| Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 15:51 CST
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the story seem to be becoming a little bit dark. I can't seem to see Boton as a vain,selfish,and evil person.Continue soon.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 04:50 CST
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Hmm... Just curious, but have you read Angels & Demons? It's somewhat similiar to this plot... just a little... *shrugs* Oh well, you need to update faster... er, ne'er mind. This is one of those stories that, I bet, will keep fans hanging on for dear life. And the kind that, with cliffhangers, give overzealous fans heart failure... :DHey, I had to type somethin insensical tonight!
| Reviewed By: lil_sis4556 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 16:32 CST
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update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update!!!!!! | Title: UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 01:12 CST
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Yaaa!!! Cool story! Who doesn't love a good Kurama/Kagome fic? Well, I personaly can't resit them, though I must say that your earlier Kurama/Kagome story 'Freak Show' was way to long for my taste. I just couldn't stay into it enough for the long reading period. I hope it doesn't happen with this one though because it obviosly has along way to go. Even if I do lose intrest I'll try to stay with it cause this really is a great fic. I love that you have Yuske in the story too. I can't get over the last chappie, it was great!! UPDATE SOON!!
| Title: a clue and a egg
Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 17:32 CST
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love it pleas up date soon if you need anopther hint or clue Q were one was the frist to march on it's self A sulla was the genral who marched on rome frist , he was from rome , "the next" clue could be located in the rome forum an dis kagome going to be a miko in this aswell ? hope i could be of help see ya oh and his is a dragon egg it is black and will hatch wen you get 10 more revies it ages at every 10 or 5 reviws or every update have fun
| Reviewed By: user: Kage Hogosha On: November 18, 2004 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am enoying this quite a bit. keep up the good work. not many could pull a chapter like chapter 4 out of their hat. i am quite impressed. Sincerly, Kage Hogosha:D
| Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh this story is so interesting the storyline is so different so fresh and you have your facts well straight. its funny how kurama gets jealous of yusukes flirting i love it. please try to update soon this fic is cool.
| Reviewed By: in On: November 16, 2004 13:21 CST
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This is one of the most intruging stories i have ever read. How did u get such good clues?
| Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: November 15, 2004 23:14 CST
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fun chapter! what do they do in Spain? update soon!
| Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: black fire angel (not logged in) On: November 15, 2004 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far...can't wait for more!
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