| "Of the Moon and the Wind" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: jade urameshi On: December 03, 2004 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 17:33 CST
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oh man Pinche Inu-Yasha...he's EVIL...and he isn't really just messing w/Yusuke he's also messing w/Kag...but at least he took the hint...can't wait for the next chapter:D...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:42 CST
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AHHHHH! HOTTIE ALERT! lol! ^_^ gotta love the jealousy flowing through the air. Good job! Yusuke and Inuyasha giving each aone -two on the romantic side.... intresting my friend. Interesting! ^,^
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:35 CST
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I really love the story and i can't wait until you update!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Living_In_A_Dream[not logged in] On: November 23, 2004 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY ITS SOO AWESOME!!!1 ahaha they were so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o jealous!!!!! hehehe its so funny when guys get jealous of other guys b/c of girls ^^ cant wait for the next update i promis i'll stay interested!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 20:05 CST
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yea, an update, thank you, and you fixed the spelling of yusuke. Inuyasha, Jelous mutch, and Kagome, has already chosen for him, seeings how Inu-kun cant diecide between the clay-pot or Kaggie. nothing can get in between Yusuke/Yuusuke(both acceptable)and kagome. Though she doesnt really diserve my bieshi *glomps yusuke plushie*
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 17:07 CST
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interesting,,,wonder if they are gonna go out of the well, when the guys are there
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:27 CST
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OI!!!! much love in the house from muah! LOL. Please update soon, yours stories are awesome! ^_~
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 14:09 CST
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please update a new chapter soon
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 13:11 CST
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 15:43 CDT
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*twitch...twitch* when...are...you...going...to...update!?!?!?!?!?! i'me getting really bored just sitting here!!!! please update!!! ja ne, Tsuki-chan P.s. UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:58 CDT
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interesting.
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's alright but not al thatr original. your grammar needs alot of work at times, but for the most part its pretty good. keep up the good work annd update soon.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 03:56 CDT
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This is cool so far. I look forward to reading future chapters! Good luck. Ja ne! ^.~
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:39 CDT
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NICE...very very NICE...I really liked this chapter...that was really great...wonder if they are gonna end up meeting w/Yuske and everyone else whenthey are doing their little experiment:D....Can't wait for the next chapter..This story is GREAT so far...THANKS:D
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