| "Servicing Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: cortney On: July 24, 2004 02:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz update!!!! i keep reading this over and over!!! plz continue!!!!
|
Reviewed By: ShinigamiMaxwell On: July 20, 2004 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow.. how could you just end a story like?! thats the untimate in cliff hangers.. write more please please please??????
|
Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
|
Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY! did you do that. Why do you always stop it at the good parts are about to happen. Your not nice. *pouts*
|
Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 05:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
|
Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
|
Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz plzplzplzplzplzplz continue with this story i really like it and dont want ya too stop, you a geneus!!! i love all of your storys by the by are ya going too updat behind blue eyes or ne of ya other storys soon? plz update this!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. Please do write more of it. It was a very clever fic.
|
Title: YES YES YES!!!!
Reviewed By: OtosuHanyou101 On: July 08, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a stoke of genius! (you have alot of them, don't you?) Of course it's 2x1 so to me it can't be bad! I luv your writings! This being no exception! Keep it going! Make Heero struggle for an explaination, then have an affair, and then decide to give up Relena completely because he didn't need her to begin with. Make Relena SUFFER!!!!!! Hee hee hee! I can be so cruel when I'm having fun! You don't have to use my plot, but I felt that you might write faster with some ideas! I gotta go though. Laundry is waiting 4 me! *Hey OH101!* Oh, hi Duo. Would you care to do some laundry with me? *The washer might break this time, though.* My friends' parents and mine will help pitch in for a new one if I beg them enough, or we could try the dryer? *Then what the hell are you waiting for!?* Okay, now I HAVE to go! See you all in the appliance department at SEARS! CHICKENS!
|
Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 13:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
|
Reviewed By: animeaddictKHxQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to keep writing i really loved it! Relena Basing YeAH that so much FUN I also agree with lil_yapper you cant stop cause you cant just leave Duo under the bed he might suffacate *burst out in tears* poor Duo!!! being shuved under the bed like that! i hope he didnt get a carpet burn!
|
Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 07, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved the yaoi seen. It made me all HHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT and bothered!!!!!!! :) I would love to see what happens next. It could be where Heero states it is the plumber's that came to fix the pipes. Heero gets dressed and gets Relina to go down stairs to find the plumber. Heero then tells Duo to go out the window and then come inside. Duo could state that he had to get something from his truck. Relina tries to set Duo up with her friend Hilde since he is a very good looking guy. Would love if you made this story at least about 13 more chapters. Love to re-read stories that I love over and over and over again. The longer the story the better in my opinion.
|
Reviewed By: lil_yapper On: July 07, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great story, yuo can't just stop!...besides you can't just leave Duo under the bed
|
Reviewed By: ionay On: July 07, 2004 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think you should make one more chapter and rub it in relena's face!! and make duo and heero live happly ever after in love ^_~! welll i hope you update behind blue eyes soon too i lover that story!! update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo, so many different ways you could go with the way you ended this!!! :looks up with little puppy dog eyes: Bash Relena into little annoying pieces, PWEASE!!!!
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
