| "it's only a game" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: It's Only a Game
Reviewed By: Salacassera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the idea behind this fanfic. There's some mechanical errors (names not capitalized, and some dialogue not in quotes), but they didn't ruin my enjoyment.
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Reviewed By: Blizzaria On: June 20, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice idea you had. I got kind of confused with the dialogue. Perhaps if you used quotation marks and clearly separated the dialogue from the rest of the text, then it would be easier to read. You also have some grammar and spelling mistakes, but it wasn't too bad.
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