| "Vampire Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Chibi On: August 19, 2005 19:14 CDT
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I'm a BIG DBZ fan and I love that fact that it's ALL about vampires!!! I LOVE vampires!!!! SO can't wait for the next one!! ^-^
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I want to know what is going! Please more!
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 22:42 CDT
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Men and there god damned emotional constepation! I can't wait to see how Bulma crucifies him!
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Title: New Reader!
Reviewed By: Fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: July 07, 2005 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heylo, I am a new reader of your story, so yeah hello. Interesting story, cool plot and all and good character developement. Um you got a lot of sentance fragments though. A lot of your sentances in your chapters don't make sense, even when I read over the sentance I could not make sense of it. I think you need to go over your chapters and edit them or get a beta reader to fix your mistakes for you. There's also a lot of spelling mistakes, it could be from typing so fast and not noticing it but you should go over it before you post your chapters, I know you want to get the story up for your fans but it would make it easier to read your story if your mistakes were corrected. Oh and I just wanted to point out that 'fore' is not used correctly in your story, you want to use for, without the >E< like when you say there fore, it's not used right, it would be there for... I think in most cases you only use fore in before and such. I'm not saying your story or your idea is bad, it just needs to be edited. Good plot bunny though and I hope I don't offend you because of what I said, it's just something from one author to another. Anyways, until your next chapter Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:33 CDT
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Well I like Vampires as much as the next girl, but man I would feel the same way as Bulma if put in that situation. Woah great graphic I love it!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: July 06, 2005 13:39 CDT
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cool, i wanna go to a dinner party!!!
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Title: Look who's sleeping on the couch!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:18 CDT
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I've read about these late life vampiric transformations before. Yet I forget what it takes to stop it? I can't wait to find out!
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Title: Uh oh!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 21:40 CDT
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Daddy won't like this will he? I love how Bulma is so willing to be Daclian's mother too! Keep writing, I'll keep reading that's for sure!
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Title: Ding Dong the bitch is dead!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! This is so awesome keep writing! I love violence.
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Reviewed By: Raine123 On: June 19, 2005 14:14 CDT
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It was not meant to be offensive. You asked how I felt about the fic, and I told you. I realize 'people' change with every situation, but that dosen't mean that their personality does a full 360 instantly. Also, I have read Interview with a vampire, several times, as well as own the movie itself. My point is, you asked for my opinion and I gave it. This is one reason why I do not write out full reviews, because there are a lot of authors out there who ask for people's true opinions, but cannot actually handle them. If you read my review I stated that it was a nice plot/interesting and enjoyable fic. I was in no way downgrading your writing, but I did state my OPINION, since you asked. I will be sure to never review your fic again, as it seems to be taken the wrong way.
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Title: Cat fight!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 10:42 CDT
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I knew it was coming, if Bulma was scary as a human she is going to kick ass as a vampire! I can't wait for the next chapter more please.
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Reviewed By: raine123 On: June 13, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::mutters:: more more more more more I enjoy your story, it is interesting, some spelling/grammer errors, but I do that as well! Nice plot, a little out of charector for Bulma, but still very fun to read! NOW, MORE MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: raine123 On: June 13, 2005 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! NOW NOW NOW NOW!
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Title: interesting....
Reviewed By: blue dragon (not signed in) On: June 12, 2005 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Mallie, this story is becoming more and more intriguing with each new chapter! I'm curious to find out what will happen next... Keep up the great work! love, Blue Dragon.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 20:51 CDT
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More please! I can't believe he left Bulma's kid with Nora! What a .....!
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