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Title: Hurricanes
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm loving your story. I wish could write like you. I sound like a teenager. lol Anyways. I can understand about the hurricanes...I'm east coast south FL myself. I hope you stay safe!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: August 21, 2004 23:26 EDT
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Wow, you are very good at keeping them in character. I like this story and I look forward to reading more. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 21, 2004 19:35 EDT
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I just found this story it is very interesting. Please update soon. I feel for Inuyasha he is thrown into a whole new envirnment and the one person that he 'trusts' and everything is too busy to help him. I know education is important but she could have waited a bit and taken a couple of days to help Inuyasha some. Besides many students don't always go right back to college after high school she could have waited a semester or a year. After spending 3 yrs trying to live both lives she should take some time to get settled in the furture again and help Inuyasha as well. Anyway good story update soon
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:17 EDT
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oooooo.... more soon please?
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Reviewed By: Carya On: July 24, 2004 23:25 EDT
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Wow. I really like the way this story is going so far. You seem to be taking a unique and more realistic approach to the "Inuyasha-ends-up-in-the-future" scenario. Much more interesting than "Inuyasha goes to high school and hangs out at the mall!" It's really got to suck to end up in a different time with all of your friends long dead. And it's happened to Inuyasha twice. I also like the fact that Inuyasha and Kagome haven't entirely forgotten their friends from the Sengoku Jidai. I'm very interested to find out what happened to poor Shippo. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: MrVampire On: July 24, 2004 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:34 EDT
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Very good story! You have excellent writing skills and describe everything quite well. Thanks for sharing your story with us and I look forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:04 EDT
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Wow... it's good! Well written and the story line is quite interseting. So what are you going to have Inuyasha doing in the future?
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Reviewed By: Interested Reader On: July 04, 2004 19:45 EDT
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Wonderful chapter. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see if Shippou turns up and what really happened with Kikyou. Update again soon please and thanks for a great story.
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 21:12 EDT
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Very nicely done, may I suggest a continue of the story or at least a lemon
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...such fluffy moments...keep writing this story!...its really good!!...woodnt inuyasha look really HOT in modern clothes?!
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Reviewed By: slush On: June 13, 2004 12:29 EDT
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i love your fic please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Interested Reader On: June 12, 2004 22:34 EDT
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Very good! Please continue the story. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 14:17 EDT
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awwwww, that was so sweet!!!! The shikon no tama is whole now so can't they wish they well open? *lightbub flashes over head* Hey!!! They can!!!!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 13:28 EDT
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kawaii fluff! i loved it! it was so cute and i absolutely can't wait to find out what happens next. now that inuyasha is stranded with kagome, what can he do? i know he's been able to travel around in her time before but that was always with the hope of going back to the sengoku jidai. no that's he's trapped, what's he gonna do and will they ever be able to go back? i hope so. a great story and i can't wait for the update!
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