| "The Drama's Of A Teenage Life" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: your fav reviewer On: July 23, 2004 02:08 EDT
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ha ha... like you won't be able to figure out who this is... I will eventually update my story... as soon as I'm done having classes pile tests on me... ahhhhhh.... you will not find who the mysterious man is yet... ok, so now for your review... wonderful chappy... bulmy and veggie are so cute... now what is it with the mysterious man you've but into your story... ok and no my vote... I really am not into lemons so I mean you can assume what they do... but if you want make it a hint many more ppl will probably be happy... I hope you update soon... and I'll leave you another review... and hopefully if I get around to it I will update mine but tests first then update and hopefully two more updates in the near future... hey I think this is the longest review I've left on mm ever... I love their new counter that was I know exactly how long I've made it... well great stuff loved it and the bv moments... well I'll be waiting and working on my own stuff.... so adieu for now... the ever infamous DBZ-Fan-Jess
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Title: To be A or to be B that is the question
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bomb chapter i love love love this. and whats this vegeta has a male stalker!!!! omg! save vegie chan from the evil. Trunks is like so going to be one of my new idols
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Title: I wanna own the ocupant of the bench
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That redhead slut better have backed off my.... i mean bulma's veggie-chan.
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: July 10, 2004 02:10 EDT
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aww veggie and bulmy...she kissed him awww.... well I liked it... its a new twist and I'm ready for all the fun surprises... well loved it, loved it... aww what can happen btwn bulma and veggie while this adventure goes on... well can't wait for more...
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Title: oh goody
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg is she going to actualy meet her birth parents. wow its too good to be true. and vegeta is going to see her throught he hard times of accepting the briefs are'nt the real family. But she loves trunks so much. poor bulma.. p.s my name means what-ever little man nan de mo chibi otoko
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Reviewed By: Sumara On: July 07, 2004 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please PLEASE wirte more of this!!!! *begs* i'm obsessed and it's great.....just the sorta fanfic i luv reading.....more...neeed...more... =)=)=)=)
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 14:48 EDT
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nooooooo!!!!! Cliff hangar!!!! Nooooooo!!!!! im rocking back and forth in my chair waiting for an update is bulma adopted? is she a chemicaly enginered robot? Is she betrothed to vegeta? Did dr. Briefs kinfnap Her? oh god im spazing. oh by the way love the story.
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Reviewed By: Little_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 10:46 EDT
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this story aint bad. theres a few things that made me laugh and i totally feel for bulma and her big family. im the younges of seven so how do you think i feel?
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!`
Reviewed By: guerro On: June 28, 2004 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update it i really want to know what happens next
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Title: go veggie kick the morons ass
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: June 26, 2004 06:51 EDT
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some one needs 2 stick a pen up zarbon's arse and twist it round bulma and veggie 4ev@ ^_^ still got my attention and now im not gonna leave the comp until u have updated *_* aaaa the computer is burning my eyes "must stay on" passes out momentarily ha ha ha im still here lustin after vegeto lol update pls!!!
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan jess On: June 23, 2004 19:43 EDT
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great chapty... I can't wait for your next update... that was a wonderful double chapter you added for us... I'm completely entertained with this new count down thing that mediaminer has... I can't wait for the next update for any of your stories.... they are all wonderful... hee hee... I'm glad bulmy doesn't want zarbon... now she and veggie need to hook up for the homecoming... and yay I can't wait for some zarbon abuse in the next chappie... maybe a b/v moment coming up soon.
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: June 22, 2004 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like it keepit coming k
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Title: Comin on smoothly
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: June 21, 2004 03:46 EDT
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so far im likein it and i tell u im like the simon cowell of DBZ lol so come on give us a show coz i wanna c some ACTION!!!!! kudos on zarbon i hope vegeta kicks jis freeza kissin ass!!!!! and hopefully me and vegeta or goku can come 2 my place but my secret love is vegeto give me him any day
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 01:50 EDT
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Funny, funny, I like. Please go on.
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: June 14, 2004 00:20 EDT
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I'm liking it already cant' wait for your next update
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