| "Nice Day in the Sengoku Jidai" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: *snerk* Froggies!
Reviewed By: Miara (not logged in) On: June 14, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Short, plotless, and really funny. Ignore the philistines - this was a perfect short.
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Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're still my hero :) Sneeheehee! Frogs!
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Title: good writer
Reviewed By: thyran On: June 13, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like how you write. i like your vocabulary. I like your idea but i don't understand the point of the story. there is one right? build up a plot and make it interesting... it could be great ;)
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