| "When I Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Lil_Kitten On: July 31, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUAL DAMN YOU! Farfie and KenKen...that's reason enough.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was just awesome! i havent read a good story bastardizing Aya in a while now, probably because my fave pairings are A/K and K/F (its easier to find A/K fics). I cant wait to read anything else you might have written. Miko no Tears and Aya
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Reviewed By: ChantalMarchon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, still can't see all my reviews-- darn site bugs.
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Reviewed By: Ardwynna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was hot, really piping, steaming hot! However, I didn't really care for your writing style. The sex was very well done but the plot around it felt very thin and rushed. The dialogue flowed too fast with no supporting description. The difference between the sex and the non-sex scenes was glaring. It really didn't look like you distributed your care and writing talent evenly. At times, the characters were so expository that I felt like I was reading one of those textbooks full of comic strips and goofy 'guides' to the subject, dressing up facts in a 'fun' disguise. However, I'm sure if you keep at it you'll get better at slipping necessary information into your stories in more subtle ways. Overall, it wasn't too bad and it was very interesting seeing Farf somewhat sane.
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Reviewed By: touched On: June 23, 2004 20:24 CDT
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woooooow! i love this story! nice nice! the sex bdsm is good (could b better, but hey it already IS better than a lot of the stuff out there, the plot is well designed, and the characters....well they have an adequate amount of depth, one could say. newayz! keep up the gr8 work and keep posting! btw (by the way) is omi in luv with ken? i can't b sure....
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Reviewed By: ChantalMarchon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 18:34 CDT
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still can't see my reivews unless I review-- this is so messed up.
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Reviewed By: ChantalMarchon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 12:20 CDT
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not a review-- this is the author and I have to do this to see my reviews for some reason
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 11:29 CDT
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Great!!!!!!! I love this story. You put so much deatil into it. It is the best story I have read in a while. I like the way you made Farfarello, how he is sane but insane at the same time. Me and my friends are all reading the story. Your the talk of the group. Please continue to write and me..... I mean we will continue the review.
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Reviewed By: Just N Case [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Silverfate2001 On: June 20, 2004 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this story and hope you continue it. I'm not really a Farfello/Ken fan, but if the story is good, I'll read it. I think I'm kind of starting to like this pairing in a creepy sort of way. There haven't been many stories on this pairing until recently. There have been only 3 other stories other than this one out of about 25 that I have read that I really liked and this is one of them. You have me very interested in wanting to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 19:20 CDT
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love it!!! cant wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: dethorats On: June 17, 2004 21:19 CDT
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Very nice depiction of a dom/sub relationship, and one that always seemed quite likely given Berserker and Siberian's on-screen tension and similarities. The description of Ken's desire in the first chapter, after watching Farfarello on stage, was particularly nicely done. The only possible negative is the extremely harsh portrayal of Aya, although I assume it is partially to provide motivation for Ken's new relationship.
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Reviewed By: AJ On: June 17, 2004 10:07 CDT
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this is a interesting fanfic. I love the unusual pairing. i never suspected farfarello and ken together. I also love your creativity in making the story. Please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 22:55 CDT
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I really enjoyed this fic. I have never paired Ken with Farfarello but I must say this particular scenario was very interesting. Please update soon.
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