| "Blow out the Candles" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: groggydog On: June 23, 2004 23:48 CDT
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Hehehe! I take it Inu Yasha's just a tad bit grumpy this morning. He should be feelin' better once Kagome arrives right? Please, please update soon!
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Title: Blow out the candles
Reviewed By: hurrry On: June 23, 2004 23:32 CDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!! awesome fic and i reallyhope that you add anmother chappie to it ASAP!! sob *tear* cant wait for it to happen when inu sees kags *SURPRISE******* bwahahahahahahahahah OVERA:: RATING: 10
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 14:02 CDT
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I must say I thought your story might have been good but it wasn't until I saw Smittin' Kittin had given you the thumbs up that I knew I had to read this. I consider her to have exceptional taste. Your writing is impeccable. Beautiful lush descriptions and details. Anyone that has a hard time with imagery could read your work and not have a problem. It is impossible not to be able to see the story come to life in one's mind. As for the plot and story itself that too deserves it's own spot light. I know this is not a very original idea but I like the way you are addressing it. I also gave you extra points for the flamingo demon, never heard of that one before. The characters so far a perfect. I can see them exactly the way you have portrayed them. I have a idea of what Kagome is picking up from being repaired. And the small story about the car was sweet, I liked it a lot. As well as your version of the marking. It makes sense and is meaningful. Poor InuYasha, Kagome better arrive with the cavalry fast. I believe he is going to have to give a few unfortunate souls medical leave. And forgetting his birthday. Sad. But he has lived so long I can see why he would see it as uneventful. Can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jadis On: June 22, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is shaping up to be really great, can't wait til your next chapter. Poor Inu, frustration, frustration, frustration!
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:54 CDT
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kewl story. i luv it. keep up the good work
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: June 22, 2004 19:47 CDT
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def added to my favorites. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Capricorn39 On: June 22, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, can't wait to see what you have in store for Inu's b-day. Update soon!!! Pretty Please!!!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: June 22, 2004 19:28 CDT
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very interesting! on to chapter 2...
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Title: =^u_u^=
Reviewed By: KagoKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story! Oh, and you made it seem as if you REALLY screwed up your grammar...please, there was only like 3 misspelled words in the whole thing so far...lol!! Well, I'll be waiting on reading about Kagome's OTHER b-day surprises! KagoKitty =^-.~^=
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:24 CDT
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and now Inuyasha enter the story.... well, interesting introduction.... ^_^;; I loved the little Inu/Kag moment ;) please keep updating this cool story! ^_^V
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 11:56 CDT
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I take it Inuyasha is only slightly aggravated. Great chapter. I really enjoyed it, even though Inuyasha is not in the best of moods presently. Hopefully Kagome will be able to sate him. Great chapter. Really liked it.
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl *not signed in* On: June 19, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!this is your first story?are you sure?or am i just seeing things...o well please update the best story i have ever read on mm.org!!!
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Reviewed By: groggydog On: June 17, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, love the story...update soon
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Title: good fic
Reviewed By: Smittin Kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 18:46 CDT
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How cute is this fic?! I love your concept for Kags mark! How did you come up with it? I'm anctious to see where this story goes please update soon! Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tried reviewing this story yesterday! It did not go thru! I like this beggining and the AU setting. Please continue! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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