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Title: Y.A.17
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i pick option A and B.
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Reviewed By: kaireirulez On: June 29, 2005 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool!!! Kai/Rei RULEZ!!! (a lot better than tyka/katy... those are just wrong...)
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Title: Update!!!
Reviewed By: yamimylove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the couple and i loved the fic please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: CharmedBookworm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. This is a good fic and I like it alot.
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Reviewed By: aeristurner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 16:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi, I thought I'd just let you know that I think you posted Chapter 1 for 'The Bridge Between Them' but accidentally replaced Chapter 1 for 'Raven Cherries' with it...Maybe you should have a look. Just though I'd let you know. (BTW, plz update Raven Cherries when you get a chance. Thankies.)
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Reviewed By: Kareyyyy On: March 20, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so wonderful!!I luv Kai x Rei CUTE!! ^_^ Please!! I want read more and more chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kareyyyy On: March 20, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so wonderful!!I luv Kai x Rei CUTE!! ^_^ Please!! I want read more and more chapter.
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Reviewed By: aeristurner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:43 CST
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Omg, i completely LOVE this fic...and i also dont really like the whole tysonxmax relationship...eh dont know why though...anyways i pick option D. *nods* Try to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moon bind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 13:24 CDT
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I want Option B! Nice ficcie in here *winks*
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Reviewed By: keisan17 On: July 29, 2004 01:10 CDT
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Hmm...potential plot eh? Lol, well it certainly isn't your typical cute KaixRei fluffiness, where they admit their feelings and all that, and there is an awful LOT of lemony scenes. Usually I prefer like one or two, but sheesh you went all out didn't ya? Poor editor lol. Anywho, continue with this, I wanna see what happens with Kai and Rei there, and who this mysterious being on the third floor is. Plus of course there's still your little tournament, so there's some more characters, plus you can have Rei and Kai supporting each other(it's cute!) when they're having their battles and maybe other characters seeing them and stuff. Oh and as for the TakaoxMax dilemma, I say go with option A, and who cares if they don't get a lot of "air time", they're not the main pairing anyway.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Drigger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Great chapter^__^ And awsome lemon!!! It was great and uh...Jw how old are you? I write lemons...Well kinda I've written one and personally I don't think it comes anywhere near your's...But um...there was one mistake I noticed in chapter 3 ....You wrote cum like come...Just thought I'd let you know^__^ I'm not being picky and nit-wity I just thought it might help a bit...And...Um...Well I don't really matter if you make more detailed or not to me...I mean whatever is easer for you to do...If it's easer to do less decription go for it...If you want to make id descriptive go ahead...Yea but I guess me personally I would like it to be really discriptive but whatever is easiest for you...Well c ya. BYE! -Chibi Drigger, OVER and OUT! (I sound like an army person^__^;;)
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Reviewed By: Neptune_Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job. I've been looking all over for a fic like this. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: DeathGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should stay with the lemon idea. It was great and update soon. Rock On!!!! A.B.C (Always be cool)^_~*
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Reviewed By: Chibi Drigger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 23:42 CDT
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It was great and YES! Keep the lemon idea...Um...This is proably a really retarded question but 'seme' and 'uke' are like dominate and...don't really know the name for the other one-_-U Anyway if that is true then you should have, Kai let, Rei be the dominate one then have him take over after he thinks, Rei has had enough fun...Well I hope it helps. C ya. BYE!^__^ -Chibi Drigger over and OUT!
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Reviewed By: .... On: June 15, 2004 22:45 CDT
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i think u should follow wat rei says ^^
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