| "So......Now what?" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter(7) please keep up with your updates
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Title: More! Update!
Reviewed By: Baby_A [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is GREAT!!!! But I want one questioned answered. Who's the lemon with? I mean, it HAS it be with Kat, but who's the guy? Thank you for reading this review. And please update!!! --- Heather
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
much beter than before. wow two thums up
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a realy great story but you ned to watch how you post your story your cuting off some of the sentenses and you need to do a spell check as well the plot is great thou the story would get a lot more revews if you worked on that spelling problam not that i can realy say that im any better.
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHa67289 On: June 23, 2004 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please couldn't live without them!!! you almost made inuyasha to my liking, but i am sticking to Sesshomaru!!! you shall never change my mind!!! and i really like the sword that you/i have!!! it sounds cool and just remember KEEP THOSE CHAPTERS COMING!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok...that was interesting. um...just let u know the type of fic that this is suposed to be is self insertation. yeah...um...if u'd like to read my self insertation it's called A diary for two. thanks byes
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