| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 03, 2005 19:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finally got around to reading this, and it's absolutely amazing! for a first chapter, it really drew me in, and i found myself intrigued... well.. i'm off to read the next chapter.... and i hope that you continue to write, and continue to share your amazing work with many... ^^
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Reviewed By: kenela [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:13 PDT
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I LOVE IT!!! i just simple love your fic and u hafta update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: baka hanyou rahvin On: May 30, 2005 18:18 PDT
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ooo nice. please update soon. i want to know if they catch her or not. what will happen to okuro if she gets the shot? will she be able to keep him still?
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Reviewed By: Sesshi and Youko lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! I have been following this fanfiction for a long time, even though i'm a little underaged to be reading it. but, that's not the point. the fact is, this is the absolute greatest fanfiction I have ever read, I mean god, how do you do it. the emotion, the pain, its all so beautiful. And this chapter, was the greatest of them all! I could almost feel the raw emotion nari felt when she threw herself out that window. I would've done the same thing! well okay almost, I am the master of the art of cheap shots on guys and i so would've made a couple on yoko and yomi by now. But, nari's a bigger person then me so I understand why she doesn't. And sensui...he's a complete prick! and and poor okuro! left all alone! yoko or yomi might kill him!!! gah! but in closing let me just say...RUN FASTER NARI RUN FASTER!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cleverbluefox On: May 30, 2005 12:58 PDT
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Gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh How could you stop there, damn. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!!!
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Title: Whooaa...
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 10:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappy! Now there's a twist of fate! I kinda expected that but the way you write it makes it more dramatic and heart-lurching. *bows down to you* I await your next awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: lil lovely angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 04:59 PDT
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PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR STORY! ITS THE BEST!
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Title: The Worthless Humans
Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 16:20 PDT
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PLZ UPDATE!!! I really like your story and I hope you update soon!!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 18:47 PDT
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i love you story i truly do and i am so happy my friend sent it to me but i have on little tiny ity bity request please tell us what happens to the black girl i dont care if you do the stero-type or not i just want to know will she make it will she die or if the stero-type afircan american have and attutide and die i juist have to know
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Title: Love it even more!
Reviewed By: The Souija [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply in LOVE with your story TWH! Very inspiring and yes i know i reviewed before (i was one of the first, hehe) but i just wanted to say "Congrats" for going thus far and i hope you keep it up! just love how it is progressing ^_~ ah Kuronue...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh)not signed in) On: April 11, 2005 16:00 PDT
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Thankies for the update! I've been waiting forever! I understand all the things you are dealing with. I can wait awhile for the next review. It's usually worth it in the end! So, here I was thinking the spirit detective was going to be Yuusuke, when really it was Sensui!! That's quite a shocker! No one was expecting that sort of thing to happen!! And FINALLY, Kuronue makes his love for Nari clear. Even though he didn't exactly say 'I love you' or anything, his words were close enough. Now watch. I bet you're gonna kill him off next chapter, ne? Or maybe Youko? Too bad it's not going to be Yomi. I wouldn't mind if that asshole ended up dead! This was a great chapter, and I'll spend the next few days re-reading it over and over again, so I know evey little part. This story is soooo good! Take your time on the next update. This chapter will last me until then! Sayonara.
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Reviewed By: RebelAnimeChick On: April 11, 2005 05:14 PDT
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OMG!! He cannot die! He cannot I tell you! cannot!!!!!!!!! Poor poor Nari-chan! Kuronue-sama may die!
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Title: Split Heart
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! You sure know how to rile one's mind up, in the good way. If I were Nari, I would probably be in the biggest state of confusion ever. If the demons are captured and put to punishment and all of the slaves are to be sent back to the Ningenkai, which decision would I make? If I went back to my home which I would have, in the beginning, done anything to go back to, I would have to leave Okuro and forget about Kuroune, plus I would probably have a hard time accostoming back to society. If I stayed to protect Okuro, then I would be in danger of all the youkai that live in the Makai. Also, what about Kuronue? I don't want him to to be punished, but what can a simple ningen like me do? See, you can really make a simple-minded person like me think critically. Your story's great and I await your next chapter! P.S. Between you and me, I would stay to protect Okuro and somehow save Kurounue!
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 16:44 PST
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This is definitely a story for those with strong stomachs. The overall grammar/spelling is very developed as well as the vocabulary. I loved readin this story down to the bitter leave-off. This comment is coming from a girl who usually loves comedies. As pointed out in the beginning of the story, rape is not an easier topic for authors to write about. Not always is sex about love of that sort of thing. I wonder about the next chapter... At this point in time, the Spirit Detective would either have to be Sensui or someone else. I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon. ~Hanami
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Reviewed By: nari... On: March 25, 2005 02:42 PST
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poor, poor nari! i hope something good will happen to her for once... Anyway, great chapter there! Loved it =) i'll reallly be looking forward to your updateQ!
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