| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: MidnightWolf On: March 12, 2005 21:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUUV IT! poor Nari! keep it up! your spelling and writing skills are improving!
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Reviewed By: whhee On: March 11, 2005 18:36 PST
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Awww!! Poor Nari! I hope something of good fortune happens to her! Please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuramasbluegirl On: March 11, 2005 17:13 PST
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YAY, you updated. I liked this chapter, I wonder if the spirit detective well find the stables...can't wait to see what happens. thanks for the great read. cya
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Title: Poor Nari
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter!! It's a shame that Nari forgot her own name but I don't blame her. I wonder who's going to train Okuro on demon skills if anyone? Poor Nari, seeking just a little bit of love but receiving twice as much sadness. Oh, well. Once again, amazing chapter and I await your next one!! Ja ne!!
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Title: latest chapter
Reviewed By: annemarieh(notsignedin) On: March 11, 2005 13:38 PST
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Awwwww!! This is just soooo sad! I feel sorry for Nari. After all that she goes through, her life just never seems to improve. It's like she's forever cursed, having done something to anger the gods, and now Fate seeks to destory her. What a terrible life for her now. I wish it could improve, even just a little. So it would be better for her, Kuronue, and her son. It would be so nice if this story had a happy ending. Will it have a happy ending? (I don't remember if I asked you this question before). But Nari probably is in for some trouble. I'm guessing the spirit detective must be Yuusuke, and he's planning on freeing her and she'll be free again? (This part of it just seems so obvious. Correct me if I'm wrong, okay?) Great job on the new chapter. I've been waiting on it for a long time!! See you next time!!
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Title: shadow runner
Reviewed By: Shadow runer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i relly like your fic so pleas keep writing and update soon:)
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Reviewed By: kuramasbluegirl On: February 21, 2005 21:14 PST
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Wooot, looks like I found your story on Mediaminor.org yay great chapters, im so stuck on this fanfic. It's great.
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Reviewed By: whee On: February 18, 2005 22:35 PST
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YAY! YOu updated! ^_^ And that was great! BECAUSE OF YOUR FANFIC, I NOW THINK KOURONE IS SEXY LIKE YOUKO!!! ^__^
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Title: Hello Again!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 18:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW!!!! Kuronue's becoming a father figure! *laughs* Nari needs to be careful about what she says, ne? Awesome story!
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Reviewed By: black princess (not singed in) On: February 17, 2005 16:33 PST
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OMG NARI'S GONNA DIE HOW COULD SHE SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT. OMG OR WAIT KURONUE'S GOING TO DIE. OMG I CAN'T BELIVE THAT WELL WHAT ARE YOU DOING WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR NEXT CHAP
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Reviewed By: AnneMarieh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 11:10 PST
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OH MY GOD!!! You finally updated!! YAAAAYYY!!!! *ahem* I still feel sorry for poor Nari. I mean, no one should have to go through shit like that. But hey! Not everyone can live the high life! Great story tho, and update again soon! I check for this thing every day of every week. (No seriously, I do.) Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: jasemine On: February 13, 2005 03:49 PST
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GREAT fanfic! i enjoyed reading this to the very last bit! Keep going, I can't wait for the next chapter! I love the way you write too! Please update soon before we all die from suspenceeee!
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Title: Tatsuki and Mitsuki
Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good Oreana Kurama. alwsome story, i thank for your hard work. great and a wonderful story, we glad that you have wrote this story. long story, you've dessert a great treat for yourself. We thankyou you for your hard ~.~
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 13:44 PST
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that was good very sad and dark i like it next chap please Black Princess aka Kurama or hiei both great boy toys
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Reviewed By: jennie(the REAL JENNIE) On: January 27, 2005 17:12 PST
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rockin' story! update soon plz
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