| "THE WAR OF BLOODY *LOVE" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 16, 2004 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was an intense ending. LOVES IT! I NEED to know what will happen next, hehehehe. This is seriously the best vampire story that I have ever read! So happy that it was updated. Now I can go do my happy dance for the next few hours. la de da de da. Well the writing was amazing, as always, and the chapter was flawless and left me wanting more and more. I cannot wait until the next chapter. Until then, I'll hold my breath. *starts to turn blue* hehehe AWESOME JOB!!! --Aitu
|
Reviewed By: wolfdemon069 On: August 08, 2004 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really need to update soon! I'm going insane waiting for the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 23:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i am almost done with my chapter to be posted. thank you for all the reviews.!!!keep them up!
|
Reviewed By: risky-chan On: August 06, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, i love vampire storries, and yours is definately one of the best i've read. way too go! the only thing i could tell you to improve the story is if you could stop writing in present tense and start writing in past tense. it will make your story easier to read.
|
Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 02, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
So now the guys got them. But I wonder what is going to happen when Kagome's painting gets discovered. Like the guys said there is going to be a fight that night. The wolves will track the sents to the house. They will smell both the girls and the vamps. And Kouga leading them will most likely end up there. The painting will be discovered and Kouga will be mad cause "his" women was kidnapped. Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
|
Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it sofar!Hope you update soon^^
|
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao that was funny keep up the good work!! ^_^ update soon again please?
|
Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was hillarious! They switch girls so that they can't control them! But Sango and Kagome could've ordered their controlled one to set the girl down? Oh well, they don't know that they have that kind of power yet. Can't wait for the next chapter! This is great!
|
Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 31, 2004 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ouuuuuu!!! This is getting reaaaally good! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Yey! They're all going "home." When are Kags and Inu going to hook up? lol I hope soon. That tailsman is one interesting thing. PS- did Kagome bring it with her in the car? Too bad they didn't pack some things, haha. Loved the funny little parts of Miroku and Yasha switching girls so they didn't have to listen. And Sango's slip up. I seriously laughed out loud and my bro looked at me funny. Keep up this amamzing work. I'll be waiting for more so bring it on =D. --Aitu
|
Reviewed By: InuyashasDemonGrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB!!! YAYNESS!!! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz *takes a deep breath* plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz *another breath* plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz- Inuyasha: shut up, we get the point Me: ya ya, okay. plz plz plz, update soon. Inuyasha: your annoying Me: ^_______________^ you better believe it dog boy! Inuyasha: -_-"
|
Title: wow i mean wow!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great keep up the good work !!! ^_^ update soon please? that was sooooo good we'll can't wate till u update again!!! ^_^ so update soon !!!
|
Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 11:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'll be back soon. i am almost done with the next chapter, or chapters if i feel good enough to write!
|
Reviewed By: Mermaid Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 02:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue with this story it is realy great.
|
Title: i be back
Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
i will be back as soon as i can. i still have some summer work to do so...it will be a little longer. i am doing a chapter in between free periods i have. bye
|
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
