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Reviewed By: canygirl On: June 25, 2004 10:59 CDT
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i love this story!!!!!! You need to write more. Oh and i love the fact the he is uneasy not just her.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 19:15 CDT
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Hi hi hi hi i'm a new reviewer. uhh...good start. I'm looking forward for more chapters and longer ones too. Really good! WRITE SOON! Really good
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Reviewed By: EnchantedLadyK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:44 CDT
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thats was no where near long but it was good
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO FAIR! THIS ISN'T LONG ENOUGH!!!! OH AND TO ANSWER YOUR QUESTION, YES THAT OUTFIT SOUNDS SOO COOL AND MAKE THE GUYS WEAR SPEEDOS FOR A 12 DAY DARE WHILE WORKING IN PLACE FOR THE GIRLS
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Reviewed By: cute_sweetheart11 On: June 22, 2004 18:01 CDT
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I really like your story and I really want to hear about Kagomes past. I think it will be interesting.
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Title: Grrrr, how could Kikyo do that!!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty(I'll NEVER SIGN IN!!!!) On: June 22, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm..... you know, that was VERY evil of you to stop it, RIGHT THERE!!!!!! Are you TRYING to kill me? Anyway, great chapy, keep it up, and PLEASE write more!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! Vellakitty ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: nakiman On: June 20, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO COOL! honestly i hope u write next part soon!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOT BAD AND DOO MORE WITH THE OUT FITS
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Title: /:) kinky, bad Rin!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty(nope, to lazy) On: June 20, 2004 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm..... knteresting, BUT I LOVE IT!!! Nice use of Angel there.
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate this story! just kidding! I love this story! i wish the chapters were longer! You are a great writer update soon!
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Title: it's me
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(notsigned in) On: June 19, 2004 23:14 CDT
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it's me again i like it that was funny..and just to tell your story isn't like InuHime's fic i'm reading it right now too..well keep it up and updte soon
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Title: It's good!
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's good. I don't think it's too much like InuHime's so don't worry too much about that. I think that this is a pretty good start. So keep it up ^_^!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 21:42 CDT
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HEY this is a good start i like it..well keep up the good work and update soon...Ja Ne
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Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty(I'm to lazy) On: June 17, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update, and don't worry, the details, to me and I guess a few others, seem better left off to the reads, you know imagination. But please don't leave out anything, what your doin now seems just fine! Oh, and the fic does seem very much so a rewrite to InuHime's, but you changed it enough, to me at least, to be different and yet a complement to InuHime's fic. I mean, if a fic is great enough to inspier another writer to bace there fic around it, I would think thats one hell of a fic!! Oh, and great first chap, but NEED more!!!!! ASAP, if you can. Good luck, Vellakitty ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOT BAD
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