Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: GoddessOfSorrowsLight On: June 29, 2004 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
You really need to update! i love this story,even though its only one page long. i think the problem is the large words the attribute to your vocabulary. most people don't know what many of those words mean, so you might want to make it easier to understand. its just a suggestion, but still, please Update soon!!!
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