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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:33 CDT
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OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS. THEY KIDNAPPED HER?!?!? SICK EM SESSHY SICK EM. That was a very nice chapter, other than the fact that YOU MADE INUYASHA GO TO THE DARK SIDE!! WITH NARAKU MIGHT I ADD. C'mon, that's so hurtful it sickens me. Well anyway. I might go back to the part with Sesshy's shirt off. *drool* well anyway. You know what to do. And nothing better happen to my second favorite couple, but also The hottie with the body (Sesshy if you hadn't noticed) Well anyway like I said you know what to do do you need an reminder? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *rest fingers* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. If you notice if you write a word a bunch of times it starts to look like that's not how it's spelled? well anyway you get the picture. UPDATE!!!!!!! ^_^ Please and Thank You. (also i would greatly appreciate if you read my first ever fanfic. I kinda think the first chapter is dumb but it gets better. so yeah) ^_^ Please and Thank you
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:24 CDT
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I absolutely love your story!! It's awesome! Please update soon! as soon as you can!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Evern On: October 02, 2004 22:20 CDT
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How could you stop there! I can't wait to see Kagome going off on Inuyasha! Naraku's not gonna rape is he?
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Title: COME ON!!!!
Reviewed By: TheHellChild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAmn u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!update now!!!! I SAID NOW!!!!! COME ONE UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: September 07, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!~ I'm not gonna forgive you if u don't!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: GRRRR
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: August 30, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Y WON'T U UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! AND UPDATE NOW I SAID NOWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Gomen!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 23:25 CDT
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WAAAAAH! I'M SOOOOO SORRY! I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN FOREVER! SO SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE PLEASE!I started high school recently and man, do they give you homework or what! ON THE FIRST DAY I GOT LIKE 50 MATH PROBLEMS! I've been so pooped, and my parents won't let me go on the internet on weekdays anymore. I'M SO SORRY! SORRY GOMEN LO SIENTO(span) SIN LOI(viet)!! I truly am really sorry! Please forgive me. I've also been busy because my school books haven't arrived yet.I'M REALLY SORRY! If it makes you feel any better, I LOVED the new chapters. I like it when Sesshy acts so sweet to Kagome...I hate Inu-chan for interrupting them...Now you've gotten me to go insane. I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I still think your story is awesome! So don't worry, I'll try to be more faithful. I am sorry for not responding sooner.My teachers are giving me sh!tloads of homework...It's a conspiracy I tell you.I'll review lotsa and make them really long too. ^_______^ So I absolutely loved the recent additions. Really interesting. I'm supposed to eat dinner right now, and I'm starved. But I feel guilty that I haven't reviewed so I decided to skip dinner to finish the chapters and review. Please don't hate me. I'm still your ever faithful review! ^______^ I really did enjoy the chapters immensely. Can you make lots of fluff between Kagome and Sesshy? Please? Pretty please? With Sesshy on top? ^_______^ Keep up the awesome work! Toldja your story will be a hit. ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Title: Gomen!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAH! I'M SOOOOOOO SORRY! I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN FOREVER! SO SO SO SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! See, I started high school recently and man, do they give you homework or what! ON THE FIRST DAY I GOT LIKE 50 MATH PROBLEMS! I've been so pooped, and my parents won't let me go on the internet on weekdays anymore. I'M SOOOOOOOOO SORRY! SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN LO SIENTO LO SIENTO LO SIENTO SIN LOI SIN LOI SIN LOI SIN LOI!!! I truly am really sorry! Please forgive me. I've also been busy because my school books haven't arrived yet, and I have just been so busy. Plus, I was addicted to GunBound for a while...Hehe. I'M REALLY SORRY! If it makes you feel any better, I LOVED the new chapters. I like it when Sesshy acts so sweet to Kagome...I hate Inu-chan for interrupting them...Now you've gotten me to go insane. I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I still think your story is awesome! So don't worry, I'll try to be more faithful. I really am sorry for not responding sooner. Please forgive me! >_______< But I'll try to review whenever I can. My teachers are giving me sh!tloads of homework...It's a conspiracy I tell you...Please forgive me. I'll review lotsa and make them really long too. ^_______^ So I absolutely loved the recent additions. they were fantastic. Really interesting. I'm supposed to eat dinner right now, and I'm starved. But I feel guilty that I haven't reviewed so I decided to skip dinner to finish the chapters and review. Pleas |
Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 09:59 CDT
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cools beans.
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: August 21, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY COME ON UPDATE NOW COME ON NOWW RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEY! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON OR I"M GONNA BE MAD AT U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! TheHellchild plz don't make me wait plz plz plz
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Title: Com'on Update faster please..
Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WRITE LONGER CHAPTER IT WOULDNT KILL YOU IF YOU DIDNT HAVE CLIFFIES YOU KNOW.*strangles nearest thing, which happens to be little brother* grr, I dont like this. Write longer chapters pppllleeeaaassseee. Thanx if you can but anyway. I really like this story and I want to know how it ends and if that damn stalker gets his ass kicked by Sesshy.*grins widely* GO SESSHY!!!! lol ok PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE AND THANK YOU.! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sugar murder kill kill On: August 20, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes that was a little too much information but it was extremely funny. I love it and can't wait to read the rest.Eat sugar get hyper go out to kill.Update soon.bye
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 20, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Btw, I forgot to put this in my last review, if you want a title to your story you should ask your readers, sometimes they can come up with very good titles. Then if people did come up with some you could choose some of your favorites and the put them on the next update and tell the peeps to vote on it and then you would have yourself a title! (Then of corse you have two other options 1. You could pick the one you like best yourself and use that as a title 2. You could try really really really really hard to make one up yourself! But of corse I bet you have already tried that ^_^) Oh and I'll say it again PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 20, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story its great! I sorta feel sorry for Inuyasha I mean how would you like it if you walked in on your brother doing that to your best friend? (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IT BURNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!) But of corse I bet Sesshomaru and Kagome are just about ready to lock him in a closet with rabid man eating squirls, or lock him in a closet full of furbys! What? Those thing can make a person go crazy...I've seen it happen!!!!!!!! Don't mind me I just feel really really hyper! Anyways I love the story and it makes me laugh, so please update asap!
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Reviewed By: dragen eyez. On: August 20, 2004 16:13 CDT
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hmmm....i like that chappie...though.. Sessy is VERY VERY VERY naughty... :S poor kagome... tho..she kinda likes it!! lol
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