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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 09:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans.
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: August 21, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY COME ON UPDATE NOW COME ON NOWW RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEY! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON OR I"M GONNA BE MAD AT U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! TheHellchild plz don't make me wait plz plz plz
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Title: Com'on Update faster please..
Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WRITE LONGER CHAPTER IT WOULDNT KILL YOU IF YOU DIDNT HAVE CLIFFIES YOU KNOW.*strangles nearest thing, which happens to be little brother* grr, I dont like this. Write longer chapters pppllleeeaaassseee. Thanx if you can but anyway. I really like this story and I want to know how it ends and if that damn stalker gets his ass kicked by Sesshy.*grins widely* GO SESSHY!!!! lol ok PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE AND THANK YOU.! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sugar murder kill kill On: August 20, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes that was a little too much information but it was extremely funny. I love it and can't wait to read the rest.Eat sugar get hyper go out to kill.Update soon.bye
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 20, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Btw, I forgot to put this in my last review, if you want a title to your story you should ask your readers, sometimes they can come up with very good titles. Then if people did come up with some you could choose some of your favorites and the put them on the next update and tell the peeps to vote on it and then you would have yourself a title! (Then of corse you have two other options 1. You could pick the one you like best yourself and use that as a title 2. You could try really really really really hard to make one up yourself! But of corse I bet you have already tried that ^_^) Oh and I'll say it again PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 20, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story its great! I sorta feel sorry for Inuyasha I mean how would you like it if you walked in on your brother doing that to your best friend? (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IT BURNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!) But of corse I bet Sesshomaru and Kagome are just about ready to lock him in a closet with rabid man eating squirls, or lock him in a closet full of furbys! What? Those thing can make a person go crazy...I've seen it happen!!!!!!!! Don't mind me I just feel really really hyper! Anyways I love the story and it makes me laugh, so please update asap!
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Reviewed By: dragen eyez. On: August 20, 2004 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm....i like that chappie...though.. Sessy is VERY VERY VERY naughty... :S poor kagome... tho..she kinda likes it!! lol
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAWWWW FUCK WRITER'S BLOCK WRITE SOME SHIT AND IT WILL SOUND GOOD.(sry 4 so many bad words, but I'm mad), but hey your a good writer you coud just write a chapter to keep us interested, it could be like Sesshy woke up the next morning to find kagome gone, he looked out the window to find she jumped and we would still read to find out why *glances at all the crazy stares*. Ok, well some of us would but hey that's not a bad idea. And I think Physco Demoness would agree with me. Well I wouldn't know, but I feel crazy rite now myself, oh well UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE NNNNOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: The Hell Child [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE DATE I"M BEGGING HERE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Title: PLZ!
Reviewed By: TheHellChild [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAn'T WAIT ANYMORE!!!! -_-
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Title: WHEN
Reviewed By: TheHellChild [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
When are you gonna update! WAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Crying now
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Title: 'WOW' keep up the good work!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (sry not signed in yet >_ On: August 06, 2004 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work!!! update again soon please? and thankx on trying to answer my question but it's just one no one should be answering inless it's in a funny one-shot called 'Wet and Wild' lmao well anyway keep up the good work update update update soon please? i'll give you a COOKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Dragen Eyezz On: August 06, 2004 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm... Sessy seems a lil REALLY REALLY REALLY possessive...i think it might be scary if kagome tried to break it off with sessy.. *shudders* oh yeah...back to your story...good job. i'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
So Was it Naraku who knocked her block off? Well whoever it is, is going to be in a world of hurt once Sess and even Inu get done with him. Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Laina On: August 06, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! It has the sweetness and the fluff, but it also has an edge which is sooo cool!! I hope to read more chapters very soon.
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