| "Vengeance, Death, and Love" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update as soon as you can this STORY IS BITCHEN
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Reviewed By: animeangel779 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color (seeing if this hmtl thing will work...hope it does) ok well dude that was an awsome story. sry about ur uncle and the hurrican thing....stupid hurricanes...INTERFERING WITH UR WRITING....DAMN THEN ALL! oh and i want u to pair sesshomaru and kagome....anyone but inu/kag and kouga/kag
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 04, 2004 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story! Is Kagome really going to kill them all and is there going to be a paring at all?
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter/story me likey I cant wait to see wut is goin to happen and damn Kouga/Inuyasha and all of the other bastard,and hoes to hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BloodAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you had to end it there didn't ya? well i got news for ya you had better update soon or i'm coming after ya. Ja Ne Kira.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn it. You had to end it there didn't ya? Oh well. Thank you by the way, for helping me. If you don't update soon Airy, I'll hunt you down and do something. Akari
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Geez, why doesn't anyone review? It's a good story ppl! Stupid pricks. ::clears throart and looks around:: I didn't say anything, I swear I didn't! Anyway. UPDATE SOON AIRY, B/C IF YOU DON'T I'LL COME TO YOUR HOUSE AND, AND... AND HURT YOU AND YOU KNOW I WILL! Your friend, Akari. By the way, thanks for the help on my story!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was good Airy. Update soon or I'll come after you. N-e ways udate. Akari
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: SecretFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. It's really good. But hopefully when you are re-writng it you won't take to long.
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 14:03 CDT
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hay again, you have a really good plot and every thing but i think it would help if you went back though it and changed some of the "I"'s into "he or she"'s. just so it is easier to understand your story. and maybe one more thing but don't do it if you don't think it will help, draw out you story with more detail. it will make it longer and easier to understand you plot and what is going on with you chacaters. oh and the best storys seem to focuse around a relationship of some kind even if it is forced and if you want more visits to you story change you summery. 'she was betrayed by them all, none of them who the claim to be. they took something form her to use for themselfs, to use to again power. now she is unknown even to herself, but what she must do is become strong, become a killer, and face the ones she used to love...' something like that will alittle twist.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 06:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
im more confusizzled as ever. seriously. i'll just go with the flow.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 11:33 CDT
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i dont get it. how did sesshy and all those lords get in there?........ i'm supper confuzizled. lol. w/e
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
hay good start.... keep going it sounds like it will be a great story. love ya
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