| "A Different Kind of You" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Motje (unlogged) On: October 28, 2004 02:12 CDT
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And another chapter! Another piece of good writting. *gets jumpy cause she wanna know what's going to happen next* Though Isizu finding Malik was something you felt coming, it surprised me none the less when she did arrive and saw her brother.
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Reviewed By: TouRin On: October 22, 2004 00:35 CDT
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:3 Nyaaa~ Not a bad story so far! I usually don't like 'alternate universe' type stories, but this one keeps my attention. n_n-
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, You got one hell of a good writtingstyle! Don't care about what anybody says, it's your story and you can do what ever you want. I'm really stunned by the way you put the words into use. Please continue.
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Title: angelbaby
Reviewed By: not logged in On: October 19, 2004 15:20 CDT
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I don't know if i should forgive you, that was quite a long hiatus for the next update, but since i did it too, i'll forgive you. Just please don't stop writing this story until the end. Update soon, I mean it or else *waves a fist in the air*
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Title: angelbaby
Reviewed By: not logged in On: September 08, 2004 16:28 CDT
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Noooo, I don't want Yami and Yugi to be split from each other. How will they get together if they're in different towns. I hope your planning on getting them together soon. Great plot development by the way and it's great how you're not forgetting about your minor characters.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Woohoo! An update! Sorry, I myself haven't got any ideas for this fic. Poor Yugi-chan! I hope you're feeling good and guilty, Yami! Now go find Yugi before he winds up in a hospital b/c someone from the big bad neighborhood decided to hurt him.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 00:45 CDT
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...Well, I asked for an update. Didn't expect this...*cries* poor Yami and Yugi! Please please please have Yami make everything better so he and Yugi can find love in each other. Pleeeeeeease? BTW, I am enjoying the story. I don't mind twists like this if Yami and Yugi get to have sex and live happily ever after (so to speak) in the end. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:49 CDT
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Yaaaaaay! Yami and Yugi are starting to fall in love! Update soon, please, lest the suspense kill me!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:45 CDT
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Waiiiiii!
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Reviewed By: Chris S On: September 02, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...yeah. I like it...A lot. So could you update...soon?
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Reviewed By: angelbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 15:51 CDT
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Oh that's o.k. I don't how long it's been since my update (not ridiculously) but sometimes you just can't think of the write...plot I guess, how to keep the plot going, yeah, that's better. Anyway. Many thanks for continuing it was wonderful. I loved the slight Yami/Yugi moment. Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat On: August 18, 2004 10:02 CDT
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Awww, poor Yugi. I enjoyed reading the fic. I'll look for an update...you're doing a great job!
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Title: yami shi tenshi
Reviewed By: NOT FAIR On: August 16, 2004 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK I NEED YU TO SOOOOOO UPDATE THIS CHAPTER HAD ME NEAR TEARS * TEAR* IT WAS GREWAT ANBD WHAT ABOUT BAKURA AND RYOU WHAT THE STORY WITH THEM GRRRRRR YOUR SO MEAN LEAVING A CLIFFIE WELL NOT REALLY BUT HEY ..........
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 21:45 CDT
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Oh, poor Yugi! Duke... why did you have to break his heart? ;_; But... now Yami comes to the rescue! yeah! Ok, update soon, and I'll try not to miss another update.
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww poor Yugi! Great story though! Keep on writing this story is so cool! Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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