| "My Other Life" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 14:31 CST
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wow that was good! I hate Kikyo. I hope you'll update soon... I hate Kikyo. She'll ruin everything. But I still wonder if Inu Yasha is finally convinced that it wasn't Kagome who stole that damn sword! Cuz I don't know, the way he's speaking to her... it's as if he still has a grudge against her! (I hate Kikyo.....) And he must stop loving Kikyo, please! She's... She's... rah, I hate her, gnah. In this fic anyway. Whatever, I hope you'll update soon! Please! And make Kikyo looking stupid in your enxt chapter! Please...!!!
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 18:55 CST
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i can't believe that you had inuyasha and kikyo kiss, even if you have a plan. please don't let it happen again i can't stand inuyasha kissing a person who is supposed to be dead in the series, it is just wrong inuyasha and kagome are ment to be not kikyo and inuyasha. please i am begging don't let inu and kikyo kiss again or hug or anything. oh and by the way your story is really good so far but i don't like the whole kagome accused of theivery stuff, because kagome is too good of a person in my opinion, but it is your story not mine. keep up the good writing and good luck with any other stories you write.
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Reviewed By: SSR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 02:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter... but it just seems to me like you repeated a lot of the last chapter and made this one kind of choppy... But I love the story, so I loved it anyway! Update soon! I wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-whitefire, not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 21:52 CST
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awesome chapter. really. too bad it has to end on a cliffie... but i shall [atiently await your next chapter, o mighty authoress...*bows to all powerful writer*. May your chapters be long and often!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-whitefire, not logged in On: December 17, 2004 20:59 CST
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why would they have gone to the dance club during the day?
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 20:44 CST
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but what about her scars? didnt anyone notice? or was she wearing a long sleeved bathing suit? and do they even have those? this is just like elimidate. great show... really slutty girls though.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:08 CST
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAAAAYYYY!!!!good chapter, kikyo so deserved the busting...lol! awesome.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:49 CST
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WOOOOHOOO!!!! i definitely like this story. and i just threw your theory of wanting something and not getting it, out the wondow.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:37 CST
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKK!!!! I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN!!!!!THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!^________^
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:27 CST
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so does that mean that since i especially want it to be inu'kag, it's not going to be? *Drops good luck pose*...damn, that pose never seems to work...
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:20 CST
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*still holding good luck pose* please let it be inu/kag, please let it be inu/kag, please let it be inu/kag... still awesome. can kikyou die? i'm not a fan of her either.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:58 CST
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*Crosses fingers, and chants her good luck mantra* please let it be in/kag!!! awesome otherwise.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:52 CST
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hang on...is this inu/kag? i really really really hope it is... if it isnt, i'll be sad, but probably try to stick with it. it's good!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:48 CST
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oooh la la!!! is it inuyasha? still only on chapter 2... should probably wait till i finish the chap til i start reviewing...
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:44 CST
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i kinda like it... only on chapter one so far, but hey! it's looking good.
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