| "The Wavedancer" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can only threaten you with kitchenware huh? well if you don't update i,toasterwoamn360, will sick my army of rabid and evil toasters on you and if i have to i'll unleash the toasters of dooooooooom! ~_^ so update please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Hikage Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 11:49 CDT
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This is really fun Yayayayayayayayayaayay please please update really soon
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Reviewed By: Soldier of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 20:09 CDT
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RAWR I'm done ^_^ ignore the self promotion lol Great story though!
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Reviewed By: Soldier of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 20:08 CDT
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Nice story! It's off to a good start and I hope you continue! Update soooon! Um answers to your questions~ Kio doesn't bother me at all keep her in and keep her the same ^_^ and then go ahead and start your second CYOA I wanna read that one to! OK here starts the bad self promotion.... If you get the chance could you read my CYOA (Gundam SEED and Gundam Wing) and critique it! You don't have to but it would be nice. Anyways UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sacred Sapphire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 06:52 CDT
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I think Kio's great! Just great! And I too, cannot understand fics were Hiei is all romantic and stuff in the first chappie... so... UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: :) On: July 09, 2004 22:56 CDT
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I like Kio, she reminds me of myself :b.Oh yeah, i like the story to, UPDATE SOON PLZ!
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Reviewed By: inu-sessfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:30 CDT
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great-_-i fainted
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Reviewed By: inu-sessfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:30 CDT
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great-_-i fainted
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 21:03 CDT
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Hiei, shutup, it wasn't romance, it was your eyez, and i think it's about time someone made you fall in love at kinda first sight. live with it, cause unless you can transport yourself out of your world and into ours, there's nottin you can do aboot it. (sorry, i had to say that to Hiei) palease Update!! BYE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 08:35 CDT
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YAY! Another chapter! I can't wait till the next! I don't really mind you character, so long as she doesn't seem to coky-*Wahh! I can spell!*-Arrogant?-later on in the story!
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Reviewed By: Fe On: July 01, 2004 06:54 CDT
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I don't mind Kio. I actually think that she's good comic relief.
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Reviewed By: Knight_in_shining_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good i like it ^_~
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Reviewed By: Soldier of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 14:25 CDT
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Gyah! I hadn't realized you'd reviewed my story until after I read yours >.< scared me half to death. Small world after all huh? well anyways great story after all! I like the personalities of Kio (you) and the readers personality. Very funny and much enjoyed at least until I found out that was the last chapter and you hadn't updated yet. >.> UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (or else...)
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Reviewed By: iplaywithfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 12:13 CDT
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HEY! I love this story.. yes kio can get romance! ^__^ and *thinks* uhh OH yea! UPDATE SOON!!! pweese.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that people who Mke Hiei fall in love wiyhin the first chapters totally don't understand him! so I agree with you on that aspect. And the story is totally great. And I diddn't know Leuitenant jackass enjoyed being in romance fics, I feel loved(hiei:don't, your just some freak who's obsessed with me.) WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!well, please update!! BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hn'
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