| "A Beautiful Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nenagh 24 On: August 31, 2004 14:11 CDT
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I'm sorry, Koenma. But you just might have to die because of that...lol! I really like the Yusuke you fluff! ^^ So good! You shouldn't be so nervous! I really like your writing style and will continue to read and review for as long as you write this! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the chap!! I like the way you did thier reactions to the tattoos!! Update soon!!
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Title: who is this? lmao funi name eh?
Reviewed By: prettypinkprincess On: August 30, 2004 22:24 CDT
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IT ROCKS!! LOL *walks out of hospital gets hit by random car* lmao dude the roxy yusuke moment was sooooooooooooo awww!!(for lack of biger and better vocabulary that we both know i dont have) umm its good!!! you wont tell me whats gona happen!! arg you suck! (lol like in dollar tree talk about me acting like a retard) and dont u dare ask about the name lol would you be my friend is i made a shirt that said that???? or had it as a SN? lol ummm yah well WRITE!!! MORE!!! SOON!!! like very soon lol
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Reviewed By: animehasmylife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 17:10 CDT
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continue!!! its not sucky. well see youi later
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 15:54 CDT
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No a cliffy! Please update soon, I want to know how she got those tattoos.
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 12:54 CDT
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I was going to IM you asking this but by the time I finished reading you where gone again, anyway, HOW IN THREE WORLDS DO YOU CALL YOUR WRITING CRAPPY!?!?!?!?! IT'S AWSOME!!!!!!Oh, I think I'm going to die of curiocity! What does Koenma have to do with the tatoo?!?!?!BTW the Roxy Yusuke moment, both in the elevator and by the door, where brilliant! ^-^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 18:41 CDT
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Oh my god this fic is great. I just can't believe it. At first I thought Roxy would be a MS but she's not. I can't believe it. I just LOVE this! And OC is fecking awesome. I just got back and it was sooooo good- but we were staying at some cheap hotel which sucked. BUT we were right on the boardwalk and I walked down to Trimpers and rode Himalaya about five times (love that ride) and then went and got a sundae at Dumsers and played DDR at Sportsland. Why am I telling you all this? *smacks forehead* Back to the fic, back to the fic- omg poor Maya. *bites lip* I think I'm gonna cry. I loved chapter four, and I loved the whole 'family dinner' scene. ^^ When she told everyone that Shuiichi was her boyfriend I laughed out loud. I know this review is getting kinda long, so I must say, update soon and I will read and review asap when you do. Ocean City ROCKS and so does this fic. ^^
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 17:47 CDT
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She can't die! Roxy should like turn into demon form and steal the mirror that Kurama stole and then Yusuke once again has to retrieve it and the same thing that happened to Kurama's mom and the little life saving thinf should happen! She can't die! Atleast not uet! Her and Kurama of Hiei should hook up first or something! Why! By the way I dont have a clue on what Yusuke in demon form looks like.
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Title: ok....its spelled right now ^_^;;
Reviewed By: CraziTMNTfan On: August 24, 2004 22:13 CDT
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hehe i just read it over and it still kicks ass! lol i spelled it wonrg ^_^;;; my bad....haha BITE ME! LOL its great ya later i bet you dont know who this is? lol
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Reviewed By: rocklover On: August 24, 2004 20:57 CDT
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please update soon!! i like your fic a lot!! you could respond to reviewers at the end of the chapters! later!
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Reviewed By: animehasmylife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 18:34 CDT
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i don't mind you replying to my reviews.... the thing with Maya was sooooo sad...... *sniff sniff* don't end now!!!!! fine *pout* yopu already did. than hurry and post another chapter..
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Reviewed By: Nenagh 24 Back again! On: August 24, 2004 16:46 CDT
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That's soo perfect!! Of course your work is stunning! (Looks at you strangely) Have you ever read any other self inserts and then went back and read your own? That would answer your question!! ^-^ I wish there was a bigger smiley face!! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Anime_addicted(once again, too lazy to sign on) On: August 24, 2004 16:20 CDT
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Don't say that!!!! It was a great ending... even though maya is dieing, and your about to cry. i liked it, it was written well, and angst totally rocks. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 12:40 CDT
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I would love to help out anyway I posibly can!!!! ^-^ It would be my honor!!! I have a pict of Yusuke's demon form! Would you like me to e-mail it to ya? I don't know how he acts in his demon form, I've never seen it other than the 1 picture I have, but I think it would definately be cool to have that in the story! I have no problem with the ancwering reviews, but maybe in case some people don't like it you could put them after the chapter. That way it's easyer for people who don't want to read your responces to your reviewers doesn't even have to look at them. Where the chapter is a little sad, it's still awsome! Oh, and if you want, feal free to e-mail me at: saraneth@msn.com
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Reviewed By: Erika M On: August 24, 2004 10:26 CDT
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Cna you update soon? Please? I loved where you left off. And I absolutely love your story. Be sure to update soon. Anybody who says anything bad about this story should have their ass kicked BIG TIME!
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