| "What the YYH Gang Does Offset" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: KaraKurama On: October 31, 2004 12:00 CST
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Hi. You may remember me. It's Minakara. Could you please update soon. This is a very funny fic and I want to read more. I can't do that if there are no more chapters. Once again, can you tell TC, EBD and KK that I miss them. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Minakara On: October 21, 2004 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story. I have been reading it since KK told me it was funny. I miss her, TC and EBD. Can you say hi to them for me? Tell them MK says hi.
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!! ^.^ That's what I would have said if I reviewed faster...-.-;. Hopefully we can get together soon and finnish typing up the next chappie!! ^.^...I'm hyper...LOL I'll spare you and go. TTYL!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Kit On: September 04, 2004 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DE AWSOME JOB! I have a funny scene we can put in the next chappy ehehehehehehehehehehe *cough hack gag*
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 22:21 CDT
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YAHOO FOR YAHOO!!!!! I GOT A PEN NAME! I GOT A PEN NAME!!!! (dances) I'll tell you about that later! It still amazes me how you haven't UPDATED YET!!!! Oh, well, I guess I could call you and complain and rant for like 5 minutes! =^.^= G2G! TTYL!!! =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Minakara On: August 21, 2004 18:10 CDT
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That was a very interesting story. Tell KK and EBD that I say hi and I miss them. Update this soon.
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser On: July 26, 2004 23:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
-_- You promised me that you would update before you left for camp... EBD:~I'm making this short~ TC and Touya: *kill the shovel dolls then take the next boat to an uncharted island that no one knows about* TC: *relaxes on couch* At least the couch doesn't sag. Yusuke, EBD, Jin, and Kuwabara made it all saggy...*looks disgusted and sticks tounge out* Touya: O_O TC: O_O *waves hand in front of herself* NO! NO! NOT LIKE THAT!!!!! Touya: *looks at TC with a look of relief* ~That's all I can think of...
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Reviewed By: ASSARISHITA SUKUARA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EBD & Jin: *both wakes up see each other and start to laugh histarcily(I can't spell anything either) EBD: do they think that we didn't plan this to happen? Jin: Maybe not, do your stuff EBD! EBD: *while laughing summons a plushie of Jin and her self that turn into two huge shovels and they find TC and Touya around hitting them on the head a few hundred times* while that's happening Jin uses his wind powers and gets himself and EBD out of the sand* Jin: where did they find this beach? EBD: I don't know but lets go terroize the others with our faces...now that our faces are covered with junk we won't get blamed for this! TC and Touya will! *EBD and Jin both laugh going back to the hause/ trailor making Hiei and Kuwabara scream like little girls. And TC and Touya are running outside from the shovel dolls
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser On: June 29, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TC: (wakes up, goes to the bathroom and screams. Runs to a Dermatologeist [crap, can't spell, but i'm on a roll...] and gets enough instant remover for her and Touya. Comes back and gets the marker off her face and Touya's) EBD and Jin: (come back) O_O TC and Touya: =^.^= (attack Jin and EBD. Once they are unconcious they both drag them to the beach and burry them in the sand so only their heads are showing. They put multi-colored nail polish on both their faces, then lipstick, then eye liner. Run off laughing evilly and then decide to get dinner themselves)
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Reviewed By: Yoko Sakura On: June 24, 2004 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was funny I cant wait till you write something else like it I cant wait man I need to get with you gir and get Ideas I am writing a fic also I think u should write a Zeld fic that is what I'm doin but It was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_O;;;
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Reviewed By: ASSARISHITA SUKUARA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EBD: ME LIKE Broccoli AND CHEESE!!! BD *starts to eat it all but saves a good portion for everyone else and they start to eat it* Hehehehehee *whispers to reviewers/DE* "I put a sleeping pill in everyone's broccoli, except Jin's" *a few minutes later,,,,everyone's alseep but Jin Jin: "Ahh, why is everyone sleeping like wee babies?" EBD: "I put sleeping pills in everyone esles broccoli" *walks over to them with multi-colored magic markers.... and starts to draw on everyone's faces* JIN:O___o? *starts to laugh at Hiei's face* EBD:*throws marker over to him* "want a help?" JIN: "OK" WE BOTH DO THIS FOR ABOUT TWO HOURS..THEN WE GO OUT FOR DINNER =^.^=
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Reviewed By: ASSARISHITA SUKUARA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL SINCE TC & KK ARE GOING TO BE GONE FOR A WEEK...*evil laughter, thoughts, and looks at imaginary TC & KK* We should have a "little" fun with them in our story, DE. =^.^= *evil bunny laughter*
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser On: June 19, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We are soooooooo sick minded...... EBD~ TC: (wakes up and uses claws to get out of bindings) EBD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EBD: Oh crap! (runs but is pelted in the leg with one of TC's claws. Falls into a vat full of broccoli) TC: (smirks) Don't forget the cheese! (pours a whole bunch of cheese cubes on top of EBD and runs away)
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Reviewed By: ASSARISHITA SUKUARA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I foregot this.. TC's arms and legs are tied up)
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Reviewed By: ASSARISHITA SUKUARA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAAAHAHAAAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT'S HILLAROUS! TC lets continue the battle.. EBD:( other nickname..) *summon mallot and repeatedly hits TC on the head*(she was sleeping) =^.^=
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