| "Irresistible Temptations" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: Evee On: June 28, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cute! I love the way you had Ka-chan change and Inuyasha be so stupid! Its funny cuteness!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: ioke On: June 25, 2004 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome story!! update update update really soon!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 24, 2004 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY ME AGAIN. SRY JUST WANTED TO MAKE SURE I SAID YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON LIKE REALLY SOON LIKE THIS MONTH SOON OR MAYBE THIS WEEK. I DON TKNOW JUST UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON.^_^ THANX
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 24, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a really good story. I seriously do not like it when people leave you hanging like that. I have to know what happens. Does she leave him in awe or something? Do they get in another fight? com'on you can't leave me hanging like this. OH PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE TYPE AS FAST AS YOU CAN AND UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is going to be good.I agree with PJ.And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:55 CDT
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I agree with PJ on the guys way of thinkege.THEY ARE ALL THAT WAY!!!At least al the ones ive dated'n dumped
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Title: COOOLL
Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Reviewed By: PJ On: June 24, 2004 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
This should be good. Him thinking he is 'gods gift' to girls and I can tell from the smile leaving Kagome's face that she is not going to be impressed. And I bet he is surprised especially since when he first saw her he thought she was hotter then Kikyo. I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh yeah great chapter I also love how you described Miroku forgetting about his shopping when he saw Kagome. Update soon
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 17:18 CDT
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Hey, not bad. Update soon. You left a cliffie. >___< Agh. I'm a sucker for cliffies. *sniff* Update soon! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Title: Awesome... But short...
Reviewed By: Kagome_4_Ever ^_^ On: June 24, 2004 15:58 CDT
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I just read chapter three!^^ It's cool but... It's a little on the short side... Could you please make your chapters a bit longer? That would be much appreciated! Arigato! ^_^ P.S.- I can't wait to read chapter 4! Please update ASAP! :)
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Reviewed By: Kouga_Lover_3056 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story's awesome! Please update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Sarah the original On: June 23, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It's great and very interesting. I just never imagined Kagome in braces and glassed. I assumed she was always like her sixteen-year old self (anime series). Well, finish it up quick and I mean quick! It's already summer vacation anyways.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: June 23, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Cool its fixed. This sounds interesting please update I want to read more. And I really hate it when guys think like that 'make the girl jealous' I mean it wasn't a fact about not liking Inu that Kikyo 'dumped' him. I was her parents so no matter how jealous she gets her parents aren't going to change their minds. Jeez they don't think at all. Anyway great start and update soon
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Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 23, 2004 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really interesting. I bet Kagome is gonna come back looking like a million bucks. Hehe, can't wait. update soon!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: June 23, 2004 08:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
um you might want to reload this I can't read it. Its all garbled
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