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Reviewed By: Kaci On: April 14, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it was a really good chapter but when did she tell him? the last chapter just explained what happened between her and uub so did i just miss a chapter or going crazy? please let me know so i know im not going crazy thanks. great chapter though. update soon i cant wait>
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Reviewed By: LauraNeatO On: March 04, 2005 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I like how you described everything, and how, although it was very limey, I'd still consider it NC-17 instead of X... like... you didn't mention genital words like "C--k" and "P---y" etc. I've seen a few works that throw in a few porn words that just really take away from the story. I'm looking forward to you going back to the present time, though. It's been many weeks since I've been able to read Trunks/Pan from you. I wonder how things are going between them nowadays.
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Reviewed By: Kit cat On: February 28, 2005 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really loving it glad you update. Hope you feel better. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: October 16, 2004 19:16 CDT
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good job love the chappy
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Title: hurry
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 21, 2004 21:34 CDT
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plz update fast lest i should die of suspence!!!!
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Reviewed By: sweezer On: September 14, 2004 04:50 CDT
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good good! keep it up, hurry, i want to know what happens.....
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Title: hey!!
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 12, 2004 14:34 CDT
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i was gonna ask you a bunch of qeustions, but at the end of ur chappy you asked them for me!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 09, 2004 20:07 CDT
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wow whata great chapter i love it thanx for the update
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 30, 2004 01:32 CDT
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what happened between uub and panny???? is this going to be a jelous moment for him or a heart break moment for her.???
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 22, 2004 16:13 CDT
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um where is the chappy? Still holding on for youre next chapters
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 23:51 CDT
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I am sooooo happy you liked my idea, now lets see if i have anymore half-baked ideas in my mind? maybe vegie follow her home to see if his hunch was true but gets caught by goten and I dont know where i was going with that. hmmmm......... maybe goku can show up and some how tie into this, oohh or marron can tell trunks he is begining to bore her so she dumps him and goes out with uub. always happy to help, nan de mo chibi otoko from mm.org
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok so you need help hmmm ideas?........... how about trunks and pan spar at his house while t & p have a moment alone with one of trunk's special kisses and marron shows up and he ends up torn between the two girls. or on a more dramtic note (not realy) vegeta whilst traing realizez that pan is part saiyan and decide to help trunks fall for her. i dont know these are not thought through ideas just pop ups if you will. hoppfully i was of some help to youre writers blockage.
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Title: ladybugg*
Reviewed By: ladybugg1234_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes Trunks is digging himself a deeper hole, but at the same time so is Pan. She can't keep hiding the Truth from Trunks. He's going to find out sooner or later, and when he does everythings she's been working for is going to blowup in her face. I'm loving this right now, and I can't wait to read more of what you've got here. Great job. Update soon. Laters.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update, love story, kicks ass, i love your style
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: July 12, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;P comeon do we rele have to wait till saturday??? *pouts* neways, cool fic, like pan/carina and trunks' soon to be problem! update, please?
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