| "Destinys can not be changed" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: celia! On: July 21, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO! ^_____^ i LURV this story! i can't wait for you to update again!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: July 20, 2004 21:39 CDT
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awesome chapter once again! and..It was the guy that got blasted, not Ishizu(or Isis which ever you prefer) right?
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol. You're forgiven. I know some other stories that have shorter chapters. Probably bout 2 small paragraphs and that would be one chapter -_-'. Anzu is so fucking annoying. Why won't they just let her go out there so she can be killed and then, everyone is happy ^^. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 17:10 CDT
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who saved them? plz update more soon!
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Title: yami-sh-yenshi
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooooo!!!!!! what happens please tell me what happens you must update please !!!!!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: July 18, 2004 22:00 CDT
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cool!!! update more soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: July 17, 2004 11:25 CDT
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Ooooo, the suspense! yay! you brought in Marik and Malik!! very awesome. I liked the guy on the T.V. I found that funny.
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Reviewed By: whiteblossom(I really hate the login thingie) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!! How can you leave it there? That is so wrong! T_T Now I have to wait some more to find out if anything happens to them. Yami and Yugi have suffered enough with Anzu. On a happier note, YAY!!! My two favorite psychos are here! It's party time! *cough* I mean.......PARTAY! With those two helping out, it's sure to be awesome. Those 6 rock! Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. BYE!
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Reviewed By: it's Magician Valkyrie again! On: July 16, 2004 20:04 CDT
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yay! I'm back from camp! Awesome chapters! I loved them! Very nice lemon too. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: July 15, 2004 21:35 CDT
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interesting chapter!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie! The Anzu bashing rocked! Take that, you biotch! You deserve it too *Laughs maniacally* Great job on that, DM ^^. The fluff was kawaii too! Please update soon! ...Are they gonna kick out Anzu? Huh? Huh? Huh? I hope they do XD. Update soon! Ja'ne!
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Reviewed By: whiteblossom(i don't know why I never log in) On: July 15, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yea! Take that Anzu!!!!!! I love that! That rocked! And the fluff was cute too. Oh, when Yami punched Bakura, hilarious. Everything about this story rocks. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: July 14, 2004 21:41 CDT
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great new chapter. update more soon!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi (Can't login) On: July 14, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved the lemon! Yugi being seme and Yami being uke is cyute ^^. Great job on it ^^. And I think I've said this before on my other reviews, Yami ish so cyute being all child-like and whatnot. ^^. Please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi (Can't login in) On: July 12, 2004 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANT A LEMON! ^____^ I lovies Yami/Hikari pairings! They rock ^_^. Yami is so cyute! Are you gonna tell us what's inside Yugi and Yami's room? Cuz I'm damn curious XD. I loved this chapter. Yami and Yugi were so cyute ^^. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! Also, MAKE A LEMON with yami/hikari pairings ^^!!! *Glomps you* Pwease? Keep up the great work ^^.
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