| "Back In Her Hands" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sadly On: August 17, 2005 16:31 CDT
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Now I must admit the story was indeed well writen and extremly creative. The first couple of chapters pulled me right in. But around the middle f the story I found it harder to want to keep reading. Once Zelda had become four times her normal size I begin to feel that this story wasn't living up to my expectaions from the first chapter. By chapter 15 it's truely amazing I finished the story at all because it had turned into nothing but downright... awfulness(for lack of a better word) The first couple of paraghraps from after Princess Zelda woke up from her battle with dark Zelda I did enjoy but the second Link started up about getting married and what not I went back to my origanal feelings for the story. To conclude this I feel I must say that this story is just downright Crap with the exception a few small parts.
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Reviewed By: PrizzZel On: August 04, 2005 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha! That was great! Absolutly fantastic! I had a hard time not getting side tracked by the oddness of Zelda being huge, but it was written well enough for me to finish it... woo hoo! I have to admit, after reading all your little comments on the bottom, I was sad there wasn't one at the end. =P Oh well, great story (whatever happened to Saria, though?) loved it much!
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Reviewed By: A LOZ Fan On: August 02, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Just finished the story. it was the best stories invalving LOZ i have ever read. I realy liked that you had both OOT and MM in it. You should wright more stories like this one.
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Title: Loved it!!!!
Reviewed By: ~*~Farore's Wind~*~ On: June 21, 2005 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED this Fic! It has everything in it...and it is just impossible to NOT enjoy. You've concocted a wonderful plot, and the ending was just PRICELESS. You're an excellent writer, and my only suggestion is to continue to write! And to make more Fanfics...if you dont mind ^^;;.
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Title: Loved it!!!!
Reviewed By: ~*~Farore's Wind~*~ On: June 20, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED this Fic! It has everything in it...and it is just impossible to NOT enjoy. You've concocted a wonderful plot, and the ending was just PRICELESS. You're an excellent writer, and my only suggestion is to continue to write! And to make more Fanfics...if you dont mind ^^;;.
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Reviewed By: Dirk Bolero [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 17:18 CDT
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Mate, that's somethin' else. Unhealthy, yes. Funny, though. I kinda know how Link's feeling, with that whole "breaking a girl's heart" thing. Childhood friend having feelings for ye, ye being blissfully ignorant of that, and then choosin' somebody else over them. Ye really captured the guilt involved. As for ye being a girl, I couldna have imagined anyone thinkin' that. lol. The fantasies of giant women kinda do all the detectorin' ye need done, aye?
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: MewMewBritt On: June 11, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a really great story.Its so cute & romatic^v^!I hope u update soon!
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Title: should have finished it
Reviewed By: redtope On: June 11, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definetly the best fic of Zelda I ever read. It's summer, so I'm pretty damn bored. Hurry up and complete it.
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Reviewed By: WhizChick On: March 29, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, without a doubt, one of the BEST FANFICS EVER!!! I can't wait for you to finish the story. If I could make a teensy-weensy suggestion, do you think you could work Kafei into the story somehow? *gets down on knees and begs* Please?
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Title: A Very Adventorous and Exciting Story
Reviewed By: The Fourth Child Of Destiny On: February 18, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story very much. You mix romance, adventure, suspense, a bit of angst and humor very well. I believe that winning combo is what makes your story so fun to read. I like how you tied Termina to future Hyrule and I also like how you describe their surroundings. You have a lot of enemy and plot knowledge, which makes the story all the more interesting. Also, I have to compliment you on your grammar. It is very eloquent and tidy. Another thing is the length of the chapters. I love reading long chapters, and I know it takes a while to write all that, but it's worth the wait and it keeps your readers hooked. I have one question, however. Why didn't Link try to find out about the Giant's Mask? Maybe the answer is back in Termina? I think I'll leave it like that and let you do the rest. Who knows, maybe you'll use my questions for your plot.
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Reviewed By: OOT_Lover_Impa On: January 16, 2005 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me there's more coming. I'm so disappointed there isn't a 10th chapter. Get working!
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Reviewed By: TwinBladeZero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE DAMMIT! This is an excellent story but YOU NEED TO UPDATE! SO HURRY THE HELL UP!!!
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Reviewed By: Aileen (too lazy to get off her butt and log in...) On: November 16, 2004 19:42 CST
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I love Legend of Zelda and I love this story! ^_^ If I was the one writing the story, though, I would leave more time for Zelda and Link to get used to each other again before letting them get all cuddly. ^_^ But that¡¦s just my opinion. And I¡¦m not writing the story, sooo¡K Anyway, I think it¡¦s great. Keep going!
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Title: Well. That's rather..unique.
Reviewed By: Kamaria On: November 16, 2004 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty well written. An interesting idea that I haven't seen done before here.
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Title: damn computer...lemme review!!!
Reviewed By: Aquachick88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah, i love this fic...its got everything! romance, action, comedy, and even *gasp* an actual plot! this chapter was definitely worth the wait.
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