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Reviewed By: Saniya On: July 27, 2004 06:21 CDT
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O_O *gigglez* Omg i love this! Can't wait for the next one :3
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. It had me chuckling at Heero's antics, especially finding the right outfit *laughs* and I love it when Relena pointed to Odin in the last chapter...heh...looking forward to more. Love Heero in this...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: July 22, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wooo! Been wondering when that would come up, LOL. Will Heero think that his twin is worthy of Duo? Or will Odin open Heero's eyes to his own feelings? *giggles gleefully* Here's hoping that you post another chapter soon.
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:35 CDT
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lol, this is so cute and funny. Hurry and update, Ill be waiting for the next chappie!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous! I love it! I also like the way you threw a 'Heero has a twin named Odin' into the mix. One Heero Yuy is hot. But two? *meltdown! meltdown!* Such evilness, having Relena point at Odin! Love how you'll have Heero react to that!
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Reviewed By: shinigamiMaxwell On: July 21, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!! soo good! but damn! continue.. fast! I want to know! i thought it would be Heero.. I think it will be Heero, but I forgot Odin was Heero's twin... Thats an amusing little piece of information... *smirks* write more.. please.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:59 CDT
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Oh this is rich! I love the idea of an identical twin, and Relena's suggestion was hilarious. Poor Heero. It sounds like he's doomed to be the last one with a clue! Loving this one!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 20, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Rolls on the floor with laughter* His brother! LOL! Heero is too cute and his reafctions are so hilarious. I love this fic. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to read more of this awesome and funny fic.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Only one page? No!! It has such a good thing going for it, why only one page?! Really, this fic is so great! Please please update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 15:42 CDT
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OMG!!! Heero is sooooo adorable!! *Glomps Heero incessantly* Please update soon! ~Wanders after a fleeing Hee-chan~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 08, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good, emotionally. it made me cry. that's so sweet, and sad too.oh It's so lovely. I thikn it's beautiful..This is really good. I mean *really.* I could never write like this, with so much feeling. Great job! OH! I love this story Simply adored this chapter, Two thumbs WAYWAY up! *wink*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 02:28 CDT
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*snickers* " I wonder if they still sell chastity belts these days" ... hmm i think Heero's doing a pretty good job at being a human chastity belt. This is a funny fic, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Pretty Lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is very funny ! I love to see a jealous Heero. lol
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 23:43 CDT
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lol ur fic cracks me up...great work
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