| "Tender Whisper" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hikari Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:38 CDT
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...i'll work on the next page right now!
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Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou On: July 01, 2004 02:28 CDT
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updaaaaaaaaaaaate soon
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 01:57 CDT
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Oi! Starzie calls him Kuwabaka too. Unfortunately (or fortunately, however ya look at it ^-^) we abuse him to no end in our latest installment. Uh, anyway, I liked it. *dreamy sigh* Kurama right across the way, huh? *snap* sorry. I'll leave you and your muses to yourselves now. ^-^
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Reviewed By: jisatsu silence [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo that was really good .. but ummz i'm confused out the dream .. i don get it =( .. sorry!! lolz .. but hey i don think i'm suppose to get it rite =p .. lolz .. anyways .. oo great job!! hope you update again soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hikari Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 12:25 CDT
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I'm working on page four now..just to let you guys know....and thanks for the review..I LOVE ALL OF YOU!
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Reviewed By: Hecates_slave [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 23:43 CDT
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Atsuko Urameshi(Yusuke's mother) is a drunk. She goes out ever night and gets drunk with her friends and she says that Yusuke should get a job to pay for everything because she is unemployed, too. She's just an all around bum. Just thought you should know that you were right. *smiles*
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Reviewed By: Hikari Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:14 CDT
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what's up with this? I can't even read the reviews I get!!! But i promise all of you...I'll post up the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: DarkFlareKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:15 CDT
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Liking it so far, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: jisatsu silence On: June 28, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo that was good!! ^^ .. i really like how the plots going by sofar ^^ ... oo great job!! i hope you update again soon =) ^^ ... great job!!
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, and I can't wait to see where you take the dimwits little sister. Grammar was wonderful compared to what my friends wrote in school. LOVE IT!! Update when you have the chance.
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Reviewed By: Matty14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 23:29 CDT
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Nice job on the first two chapters!
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