| "The Marching Dragons" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Monkey gurl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read!! Ever since I started AP English in highschool I have been extremely picky about the stories that I read. Most of the time I didn't read them because of the grammar, but your story is far superior than others. I've only been able to come up with a few spelling errors. Your story is absolutely amazing and I hope that you keep up the incredible work! If you ever need an editor do not hestitate to ask. It would be a great honor to edit your story. I look forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! i love it, i gives it a ten!
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Reviewed By: darkandlovely On: June 21, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE IM NOT GETTING YOUNGER BY THE DAYS YOU KNOW I WOULD LIKE TO SEE SOME MORE BEFORE I HAVE MY GRANDCHILDREN COMEING AFTER ME YOU KNOW AND IM NOT A MOM YET AND FOR A VERY LONG TIME TOO SOO HURRY IT UP ALL READY YOU GOT A GOOD STORY SO FINISH THE DAM THING
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Title: great!!
Reviewed By: azn_babe56 On: April 28, 2005 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls continue!!! i luv fluffy/kagome parings!! look forward to the other chappies!!
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Reviewed By: Sam* On: April 25, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! i just wanted to point out that in the chapter where Shou found Gome sleeping in the band room, he said it was his moms, so he already knew...:P thats it though..i love the story! please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: eowyn_angel On: November 05, 2004 21:20 CST
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please please update as soon as possible please?!?! and also i like the way you used Shou instead of Sess or Sessho which has been used way too many times to count
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Reviewed By: Cranberry Sauce On: November 05, 2004 20:40 CST
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Hey! just read story. love my compliments to the editor.Also, please feel free to tell me that you updated your other story if not i won't bither to look. Also, contact me soon. if possible 2morrow. tanku. cs
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Reviewed By: Cranberry Sauce On: November 05, 2004 20:31 CST
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hello! this not a review.ijust wanted to say hello and that i may be gone the whole year. Also let me state it is ABOUT BLOODY TIME YOU UPDATED!!!any wasy i miss you and everybody else. i don't know how to connect with you are you a your d or m's anyway i'm about to read your fic so i g2g bye
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Kikitravel (mm.org) On: November 02, 2004 12:21 CST
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Ooh! Fun fun fun! Souta walks into the picture!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Kikitravel (mm.org) On: November 02, 2004 12:21 CST
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Ooh! Fun fun fun! Souta walks into the picture!
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Reviewed By: Crandberry Sauce On: August 25, 2004 23:07 CDT
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You didn't have to be cruel. If you were going to make someone terribly annoying it sould have been Cat. And no Iwon't forget about the typo. I can't. Still love the story(even though i'm nothing like how you made me. I'm more bitch than annoying pest). p.s. it's not cam, it's can.
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: August 07, 2004 12:19 CDT
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Hey! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see how this fic is going to turn out!
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Reviewed By: Crandberry Sauce On: August 05, 2004 23:11 CDT
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Hey this is the best chapter I ever read from you. There aren't any panty in the kitchen mistakes. Well I love it and remeber you promised woodwind section for me. Story is great write some more. Mention Band Crack
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Reviewed By: Flare-Chaa On: August 02, 2004 15:43 CDT
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^^ It's interesting so far. It's just.. the mental picture I have of Kagome nicknamed, 'Gome', is that she wears those baggy overalls that mechanics wears with the white t-shirt. o_O' Strange.. but yeah. ^^ Well, anyways, update soon!
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: June 28, 2004 09:50 CDT
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Interesting how you made Kagome's name into Gome. It's also interesting how you used "Shou"'. Everyone uses Sessho and Sess WAY too much! Nice to see a change! ^__^
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