| "Shinigami's Stage; Behind the Jester's Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda (to lazy to login) On: November 05, 2004 09:52 CST
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^^ Ok, I understand now. LOL. Anyways, keep up the good work, and I would give you a poem to use, but I'm terrible at them. So, please update soon.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Sivy On: November 05, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really interesting. I am excited for the next update. ^_^ can't wait
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda (to lazy to login) On: November 04, 2004 12:48 CST
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Wow, I really liked the newest chapters. Sam and Eric where really good. I like them. But I think you should narrow down how many characters you have in each scene. Because it seemed like you completely droped the 4 gundam pilots, Cathy and Iran. *shrugs* Just a suggestion. ^^ Now, UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Netjeramunet On: November 04, 2004 11:15 CST
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WARNING EXTREMLY RANDOM. I'm reading lord of the flies in English class right now. haven't gotten very far but yeah. I got a poem you can use if you're still doing the mask thing. THe silent staring mask looks down upon mr from the balck painted wall. looks down upon the world from the vault of the sky. Waiting to pass a judgement upon us all. Some will be spared others will fall. Most will be stuck neither able to fall or fly. An anchient god with power beyonf imagination. Then suddenly everything snaps back into focus. THe mask on the wall , on the black painted wall. Is a mask, something to hide behind , something to disguise one's true self. So what god would hide behind a mask? By Danielle Demers titled Mask on the Wall Only 24 more to write ^_^ or you'll have mercy and post the other chapter *Puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Netjeramunet On: November 04, 2004 11:05 CST
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Evil! How could you do something like this sob, just as I was really getting into it. SO I guesss I'm going to have to send you 25 reviews ^_^ Mwahahahahahaha *choke* *hack*
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Reviewed By: Netjeramunet On: November 04, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Netjeramunet On: November 04, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You
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Reviewed By: Netjeramunet On: November 04, 2004 10:50 CST
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LOL THANK you for making my day! That scirpt change was so funny I had tears down my face. Not bad for a person who got whack in the face with her guitar. The stupid thing was that I did it to my self -_-U. But I got to miss out on school ^_^ Solo Maxwell a lot like Duo and I can't wait to see what happens when the G-boys meet up with Duo again
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Title: You got a review
Reviewed By: Netjeramunet On: November 04, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you want reviews I would sugest that youpost your story on fanfiction.net, because a lot of people don't know that this website exists. I only found it because I was grounded from fanfiction for a month. Anywho. I love the story and your little take on shakespeare. Your poens are really awesome and inertesing to read. I can't wait to see what happens when Heero and Duo meet again ^_^ (Netjeramunet means Divine mystery in Eygptain in case you were wondering)
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just keep me laughing with this story, its great to see duo as more of a father than a jokster.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Sivy On: November 03, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really have a liking to this next chapter. I really can't wait to find out how everything is happening and what will happen and all that jazz. Hope to see an update soon!!
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:25 CDT
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poor duo....yeah anyways great story so far...so please update...i just skimmed it so can u plz tell me if it's a yaoi? if it is is it 1X2? cuz i luv that pair well...yeah...ja ne ~ayame
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 11, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE IT VERY MUCH AND WOULD LOVE TO HAVE MORE COME OUT REAL SOON. CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU HAVE MORE. I LIKE THE ENTRIES LIKE THE POEMS BUT THEY ARE NOT A GOOD AS THE ACTUAL STORIE. YOU NEED TO MAKE THEM SMALLER IF POSSIBLE GET MORE STORIE LESS POEMS AND SONGS. BUT LLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IT NO MATTER WHAT MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 05:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is interesant form the beginning. I hope you will add new chapter soon because it would be great to see why is Heero all the time with Relena and how comes Solo did not died when Duo was little. Please work on your story soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! First to review! I love the story so far. Poor poor Duo Maxwell, hiding behind a joker's mask. I hope you continue and update soon!
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