| "The End is Only the Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 30, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Cool. Love the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tuborgwolf On: June 29, 2004 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, so good. I am curious to see, however, how Kag is offered the teaching position since Xavier's is supposed to be a "secret" school for mutants. it appears that Logan has an eye for Kagome. That would make an interestng pairing. Also liked the bit about Kag sensing a person who is 1/4 demon - and it's logan. Makes sense. Very Minor point - pls be careful withh pronouns when switiching POV of the characters... it's very hard to do, and for the most part you have done it very well... Anyway... pls update soon, I am eager to see how the rest of this story goes!
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Reviewed By: Chryblosom On: June 29, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like ur fic, i hope you continue! i rele like IY/X men crossovers!!
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Reviewed By: lady3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 13:29 CDT
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I'm liking your fic!! You should update soon! I'd give the overall rating a 9, because the style of the writing. You should explain how Sesshomaru got to be friends with kagome. Who's Londan?
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Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's an interesting start. I'm getting curious as to where you are going with the story. Please update soon.
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