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Reviewed By: Hot Fire (not signed in) On: November 02, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked your latest installment, but I have a question.What happened to my suggestion about human Inuyasha and Sango? I still want a lemon on that please I beg of you. See ya later.
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Reviewed By: Zelix (not logged on) On: September 25, 2004 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, now THAT one was one excellent story! full 10 stars from me, really excellent!
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Reviewed By: Hot Fire (not signed in) On: September 25, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story a lot but I wonder if you could do a Human Inuyasha/ Sango that would be cool. You'd be the first to do it also.
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: September 19, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah that was great. hee hee Sesshomaru blushes So cute yeah you should do a spin off with Sesshomaru and Shori's mom. That would be great! Love and Peace to you.
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Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this one Inu/San are my favorite couple and it sure beats the hell out of Inu/Kagome I'm just plain sick of those. How about other collections like my other favorites. (Inu/Kagura and Inu/Ayame) Could you make lemons on those please I'd do it myself but I suck at lemons unlike you. ~Signed- Hot Fire
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Title: Woo!
Reviewed By: SweetCandyCanes On: September 11, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Woo..I love your writing! Maybe you should do one with Iuyasha and Sango in a plane ;) Just an idea for ya. Hope you come up with another one soon.
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Reviewed By: snet On: September 02, 2004 15:57 CDT
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Nice. Really really nice. I love reading your stories. Inuyasha/Sango is one of my favorite pairings. Could you make some stories with Inuyasha and Kagura. Their another one of my favorite pairings but those kind of stories are so hard to find. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: Embyrr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Okay, last time I had sixteen characters left, so I couldn't really say anything else. (Sorry about the blank review, my fingers accidentally brushed against the enter key.) I must say that you are brilliant, really, you are. So, I have two story ideas that you might find interesting: first, Sango could be a librarian and Inuyasha has a crush on her, but being the bad boy that he is he mustn't let his reputation slip by going out with a librarian. At least not until he goes absolutely insane with lust. Second, Inuyasha could be a human/dragon hybrid (going on the idea that dragons can assume the forms of other living beings) and Sango is a dragonologist. Why oh why doesn't mediaminer let you put paragraphs in reviews? I've been without candy for almost twenty minutes and it's making me grumpy. Ever the totally insane: ^-^Embyrr-_-zzz
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Reviewed By: Embyrr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 18:56 CDT
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Title: Bondage
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Atropa, if you're open to suggestions, i think that you should do a bondage scene! I think that would go right along with the sexual energy that Sango tries so hard to suppress.
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Reviewed By: Embyrr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee, someone writes Inu/San stuff! Your writing style is interesting and the characterization is palatable. And we all know what garbage one has to dig through to find even one of those traits. Your spelling and grammar, though, leave much to be desired. I had, once again, to turn on the mental "grammar fixer" to clean up the unclear sentences, switch out words you had accidentally substituted for other, similarly spelled words, re-conjugate the un-conjugated or miss-conjugated verbs, and fix homonym problems. Of course, you coming from Sweden, I would assume that English is a second language, and a second language is more than I can boast because one year of Spanish does not make me bilingual. You may want to re-read your work a few times though; I find that reading slowly and out loud often helps me. Or I could just edit all of these one-shots and email them to you. It would make for even more enjoyable reading and I'd finally get to red-pen something. Well, now that that Edit Beastie (the little grammar obsessed creature that lives in my brain) has been sated, I can get back to praising you. *Builds shrine to Inu/San lemony goodness* And this is coming form an (until now) devout Miroku/Kagome worshiper. Of course Miro/Kag leaves a HUGE opening for Inu/San, and I really like those two couples. (Why, oh why did Takahashi have to be so blind?) I'm running out of space so I guess I'll have to shut up. Ever the totally insane: ^-^Embyrr-_-zzz
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Kiranta On: August 18, 2004 12:52 CDT
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Very nice. Your specialty must be doing AU's. Wonder what you got instore next. Maybe Kagome setting Inuyasha & Sango up after they're dumped by Kikkyo and Miroku?
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Reviewed By: Duvak On: August 18, 2004 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. Sweet. Lord. I'm certain you've written more Inuyasha/Sango lemons than there are I/S fics on FF.net. What are you going to turn your skills to next? Shippo/Sango? :P
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Title: Excellent...
Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamned [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again... you succeed in making another great story! You have yet to make one bad story so far... keep it up!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Ryoko3600 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good One shot's!! Keep writing!!! Please!!!!!!!!!
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