| "Running With What You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: whitefox4387 On: August 01, 2004 13:49 CDT
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y havn't u updated in a long time u need to update i need to read more of this please update soon
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Reviewed By: nekura inuyasha's lover On: July 26, 2004 16:39 CDT
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this story was great i love crossovers, i think this could turn out to be a great fic. oh by the way i was wondering if you can tell me how to write on this web site as well as fan fiction please tell me how to do this!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please update soon!
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Title: Diner
Reviewed By: Gothic Rune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 08:23 CDT
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cool chapter slow but it was alright. well see I reviewed please update
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Reviewed By: Kappa-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 15:51 CDT
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Ummm... I was just wondering... what are their ages? Are Toboe and Hige younger then Kagome? o_O -________-;;; I'm confused... Anyways, update soon! Oh, is this a Kiba/Kag fic?? o_O
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Title: THE BEST!!
Reviewed By: KuramaMate2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOW!!! I have 5 things to say.... ahem, 1.update, 2. update, 3. hook Kagome up with Kiba, 4. update, 5. update, oh did i say UPDATE, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story line, but... the words i need to mention are description and adjective. Your story would be so good if you just put some more depth. like when kag's family died, that should have been a very emotional time and deeply hit the reader. Also instead of using ( ... ) to describe stuff put a sentence that describes what the scenery looks like as kag is doing an activity. Adding detail makes the story longer, which is a good thing, and also it makes the reader get more into what's happening. Like if someone falls in love then something happens to split them off... if you just say they fell in love then the reader will be like "oh, ok", but if you were to make the love scene into a full chapter and they broke up later the reader would be like "NOOOOOOOO, they can't break up! Oh My God. I wonder what will happen etc..." Know what i mean? Anyways, I really do like your story and i am just trying to help, but it could go so much further. ...later... ^_~
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Chamringyou (aka EQenchanteress) On: July 13, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really good! you really really need to continue it as soon as you can! lol please
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Reviewed By: Sailor Light Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:28 CDT
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I really like how you did this fic
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Reviewed By: Sailor Light Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:26 CDT
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Reviewed By: Sailor Light Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:22 CDT
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Reviewed By: IOWA CHIC On: July 12, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I really like your story and want to read more. Plz plz plz plz plz plz update ASAP!
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Title: hi!
Reviewed By: Meiko Kazuke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 16:35 CDT
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YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!! it was great it was beyond great but you have to update...oh yeah what's the pairings?
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Reviewed By: Dragongoddess925 On: July 10, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very good.Cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: July 08, 2004 13:23 CDT
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i luv it plz update oh and in the next chapter could yopu put how many more reviews do you want and kagome revaeles her miko powers?
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