| "When it Hurts" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope things get better for you and that you get over your writers block. can't wait till you put the next chap up!
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Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know how you feel I just barely updated my fic. This is a vert good story I hope you update it someday.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 22:20 CDT
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i am sorry for what is going on at home. i wont lie, i dont kow what your going through. i hate it when people say that and they dont. i hope it will heal soon. but to let you know, my family has a divorce, it was hard at first but i got over it with time. i hope evereything works out.!!!
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: August 03, 2004 19:21 CDT
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hey you got around 25 reviews ppppppllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon or else you won't see me agian
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 22:54 CDT
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WOW GREAT STORY
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 01:23 CDT
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cool
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 22:13 CDT
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u just have to keep on going and make sure that ur chapters r long justlike that one please update soon u just have to k remember update soon k see ya u can count on me on sending things like this every chapter
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Reviewed By: hissori tenshi On: July 15, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have plot uve described ur characters though in a boring way, u still have to explain what happened to the inu-group and y kagome isnt frends with them and you have to explain who this mysteriuos lady/witch person was and how kagome is a wolf demon/miko. did i miss n e thing? o yea, explain y the wolf's rain crew r doing in modern tokyo! i dunno wat else but update soon kk?
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 20:36 CDT
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no fair it was getting so good please update please ^_^
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Reviewed By: babz On: July 10, 2004 18:50 CDT
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update soon. i love this story it is so original and it is like anything i have read before. please update soon
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Reviewed By: fimvr On: July 10, 2004 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was alsome update soon
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 23:59 CDT
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this is great! i can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Macha On: July 05, 2004 22:02 CDT
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I really like your fic and I think its great that your're doing a Kagome x Kiba pairing. Great job just be sure to update soon!!!!
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Title: GO ON!!!!
Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U HAVE 2 GO ON. IM NOT JOKING! THIS IS THE BEGINING OF A GREAT STORY. I WILL B WAITING 4 IT!!!
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