| "my anime road trip of chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Title: This is good plus...
Reviewed By: Jidus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:50 CDT
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Your story is getting good so far Shane. I was just wondering if you could change me into my raptor demon form in the next chapter, please let it be at a full moon. And can my brother join the enemy he's evil in general, he wears a black cloak and clothes like mine except he wears a face mask and he has crimson eyes. Plus only I can fight him for we both are the masters of the darkness.
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Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:33 CDT
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.................. wow...... u really are serous about her aren't you? i wanna know why you wanted to be with her in the first place and hehehe.. i have an chapter plan.. lets say.. miko disappears one day.. and you (shane) find the a note saying, "to the very annoying demon, I have captured your mate, and to recieve her back, you must defeat my army of armored cyclops, BY YOUR SELF. i will be waiting in the shadow realm.. sighned, urinka(whatever u speel it)." and when you do get there.. miko is supeneded in mind air, uncoiunous of course, and guarded by 1,000,000,000,000,000,000 cyclops, and heres a little trick. if you kill a giant, you kill part of her soul, kill 5 of them and she dies, now that would be tough wounldn't it? and you have to defeat them all urinka says.. so ur in a pickle.. (FYI: Miko's eyes is gold, KyoKyo's eyes is aymest)
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 18:31 CDT
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whoa cool chap!
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Title: note to yamifanner and zephyr
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 17:25 CDT
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yamifanner: i am sorry that your character isn't talking musch thruout the story, but it is really really REALLY hard to keep track of 23 character in this and growing, i will eventually get around to everybody but it will take some time. zephyr: i am sorry that your character doesn't really fight that much, but i decided to use his godlike poweres to upgrade everybody's weapons (those who fight) and i didn'y know that he did fight, i thought you meant he fought once, but then quit because he hated violence, but every battle i include him so he protects those who are wounde with a barrier and then upgrades their weapons to make the characters stronger. sorry for any inconvienience to zephyr and yamifanner. shane.
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Title: i messed up on a review...again...
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 17:07 CDT
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i dont mean to complain, but i'm just a little bit sad that Zephyr hasn't really been in the last 3 or 4 chapters... i know that he cant really fight and all, but i threw in the whole, "god like powers" and "extremely strong, fast and tough" things as compensation for this. but ah well, this story is your baby, and i am sure that it'll be fine. - Chaos Damn It
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Title: where am i?
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 17:03 CDT
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 15:40 CDT
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I liked the shane/miko pairing. It's kawaii!! Okay, let me introduce you to my yami. Her name is Sapphire. She can have her own body when she comes out of my Millennium Charmbracelet. I haven't got to say anything in the story. Hope you update soon. Ja ne.
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:09 CDT
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You'd like to hear why? hm well I think it's awesome that you used an oc (well kinda oc) lol and hn well maybe because it's an oc! usually I don't care for ones that go in depth with their fantasies about being with their Bishounen....wait! I shouldn't talk! *huggles Sesshoumaru* update soon! and thanks for the battle! whoot
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 06:35 CDT
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Cool but do you mind if I replace my sword with a whip covered in thorns? I could yell THORNS OF TERROR and sort of you know, um whip it at them? ^_^; I like the story it's awsome!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Terra Mecca Solace [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 23:04 CDT
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HAHAHAHA omg...I seduced a chick!!! Shes not bisexual but has no problem seducing the same sex XDD man heh heh well I hope i'm not asking too much but can I be in a battle sometime too? pretty please? and yes! I agree with you again! the miko shane thing is so cute ^___^!!
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Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 22:18 CDT
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O_O!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! *goes insane.. running around oin circles.. miko appears..* Miko: plz slow down.. KyoKyo: *stars shaking Miko* THIS IS SO SUDDEN WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL MEEEE!!! Miko: cuz you would act like this. KyoKyo: oh. anyways.. great chapter.. it was all to sudden.. it makes my head spin @_@ make more chapters soon! Miko: *wink*
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Title: pretty cool
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:02 CDT
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i enjoyed that little chappie. cant help but feel good when a character given as a suggestion is put in to a story ^_^ anyways, i leave whatever happens to Zephyr up to you, and hope that more awesomeness occurs. i'll be sure to check on this story more often from now on. - Chaos Damn It
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Jidus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for giving me a kick ass scythe, hope you update soon.
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Title: note for kyokyo
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 18:28 CDT
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to kyokyo: thanks for letting me be paired with miko, i do promise that she will see yami every few chapters with her blackmailing(hehehe), plus it sounds like a cut coupling. be fopr warned, 2 chapters are being made as you post,or read reveiws. shane. ps, the 2 chapters should b up today or tomorrow, the first is already being made.
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Reviewed By: KyoKyo866 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 18:18 CDT
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eh? o_O
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