| "Secrets of the Shinju (Part IV): Power of the Purified Shinju" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 13:35 CDT
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I can't believe someone had the gall to steal your story out right! How incredibly rude! I'm glad all your other faithful readers "helped" her see the error of her ways. Love the story, btw, and if you ever need someone else to volunteer to kick some random persons ass, I'm yer gal. ;-)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: August 02, 2004 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have a great story. i love it, hope update soon!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 00:39 CDT
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just click your heals together three times and say... there's no place like home! ^_^ update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was anticlimatic. ah well. a very informative chapter none the less. can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea i was able to read the 20 chapter because i was looking through some new stories to read and when i saw this one i noticed the 20th chapter so i decided to read it. That is kind of weird though hopefully your account doesnt get terminated though. Well update soon on either one haha
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 17:38 CDT
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im not the brightest cookie in the book lol, i relized last night that there were three parts before this one lol! no wonder i didnt understand what was going on! lol any way, once again great story! cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good god, this story is riveting. i've sat here for the last two days, i read the entire shinju series. and i spent it yelling at them all. especially sesshoumaru and inuyasha. now, if you don't update soon i'm going to go stark raving mad from needing to know what happened!!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:02 CDT
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RAWR!!! great chappie! i wonder if sesshy-sama will be ok???hehehe update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (didn't log in again...) On: July 29, 2004 10:50 CDT
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sniff it's so sad for Inu Yasha...! But he was such an ass too... but still, I feel bad for him!But he deserved it. In other words I really like your fic, I really wish it won't end! Update!!
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Reviewed By: Suzu_ On: July 16, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! ^_^ I've been reading it on fanfiction net until part four. Why don't you just tell the readers at fanfiction net to read part four here so that you don't have to update here and there? Anyways keep up the WONDERFUL work and UPDATE ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (didn't log in) On: July 13, 2004 15:26 CDT
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your story is simply awesome. I read it from the beginning and I really like it... we could possibly think that it's the real story!! Seriously! I really like the way you link your fic with the real story, it just fits! It explains so many things that we don't understand in the real story. It's really good. Really. Continue your great job!!
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Title: story expanding beautifully
Reviewed By: pianita On: July 12, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story from the beggining. I like the way you have blocks for the different parts. With the last chapter you have given Naraku a heart, which in my view add credit to your writing skills. What i mean is that you make your characters human, they are not either good or bad, they have shades and dilemmas. Kudos on your development of the story.
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Reviewed By: sweetness427 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant story. I cant wait for the next update.
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